Black Poetry : captivity

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Today i sit here
    in the chambers
    of my slumber

    The captivity
    of these walls
    where my mental
    is captured

    Thinking
    of
    yrsteryears
    and
    today
    the flash floods
    my mind

    a gentle silent
    tears falls
    i've came this far
    can't go back
    yet seem to can't
    go on !

    slowly , i face it all
    as my hands roam
    my pen scribe the
    inner emotions
    i fail to read
    yet is written
    another chapter posed
    another fead feast to
    my memories

    poetically thinking
    in my chamber
    of
    hidden verses
    my lips sealed
    my handz won't stop
    the ova lay
    of every stroke i paint
    what is called
    blue magic
    deeper into my orbs
    of captivity
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's poetic!:heart: It's in the inner tubes of that pen Rich....great flow!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it is Thank u
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich, :wave:

    WOW!! Great flow Rich!! We are driven to create. And you, my friend, do this so well!!

    Thanks for the WONDERFUL read!! :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    the essence of the poet.
    Tyteness!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sierra.........it was for that moment my mind combind wit da pen
    and captivity flowed Thank u and most welcome


    skrybe........the essence of flow was mentally posed to a
    poetical spray of beauty thankz bruh .....
     
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    hidden verses, my lips sealed, my handz won't stop the ova lay
    of every stroke i paint ... As we read our minds become like stretched canvas, absorbing your unspoken words...The silence of communication..."This is Art"
     
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    angelicsage..................yes the art of poetry indeed
    thanks
     
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    The King in chambers
    Thinking of
    Knights and
    Ladies in Waiting
    Dreams of peaceful
    Kingdoms reign
    As he falls into dreams
    Dreaming
    White steeds
    Recueing his Princess
    From the dragon's domain
    Quill in hand
    Falls to the floor
    As he peacefully slumbers
    His dream to be fulfilled
    At sunrise
    On the 'morrow
    His heart is full
    And he smiles
    The planets orb
    To the position
    Of castles
    Greater than
    Camelot
    He will bring her there
    To his castle
    And happily
    Ever afters...

    :heart:
     
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    U cindy said it so well ..........yes thankz
     
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