Black Poetry : Captivity of Song

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  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Captivity of Song




    It is not the foundation greater or less,
    share of humanity of Gods most precious jewels,
    within the circle of righteousness’.
    Veils of black emotions sings,
    the songs of the tombs of thy ancestors,
    Captivity without a tune of liberation,
    or the sacred treasures of thy ancestors.
    Superior of beauty, elegant essence of wisdom,
    the royalty of a greater foundation.
    Captivity has no rhythms of Gods words.
    Delicate of sanctuary, sensations filled with spirit,
    captivity will be no victim song.
    The dignity that shall never fall.


    Successful of the beginning,
    the light that shines.
    Oh why do thou challenge sadness,
    the obstacles of convictions, beliefs,
    of a perfect love, roots of my light thou enhancements,
    lifting from the burden of virtues, everlasting.
    The flaming waters of the seas,
    has become the hell,
    of captivity, the songs await my death beyond the seas.
    Who are thou spirits beyond the seas.


    The song yells I the captivity,
    of your convictions awaits for thee.
    Water thy flames my inner being,
    devotion of the song of the sea.
    Memories of the spirit of the sea.
    Come within the waters,
    and let captivity flee,
    there is no harmony within this burning sea.


    Copywriter 2002
     
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    dis was da bomb ......tooooooooo tyteeeeeeeeeee
    see ya pen pose power of ink like no other
     
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    wow i see this on a" black visions"greeting card . love it
     
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