Black Poetry : Captive Of Time

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  1. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wanting to not align myself with rhetoric
    Yodels laced with cruel intent
    Malicious reporting making 911 confusion’s row

    It is the day
    When chaos is our bedfellow
    Weapons of mass destruction

    A destiny necessary only for Iran
    Where we must divert world war III
    By reducing Iran to prehistoric values

    When history did not exist
    Because it was not written
    We are reduced to patriot reflections

    1 2 3 …… 1 2 3….. 1 2 3……
    There must be a way to break away from this rhyme
    Reason that there is a standard to behold

    Families must grow in harmony
    Where children learn from ancestors plenty
    Society is a place to preserve and move boundaries

    Making a world desirable to live
    In the land of plenty and least
    Children unite for the things parents once imagined

    Patrice C. Queen

    Lilpea gave this title 12/4/07
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent piece of art Patrice, I see you still got it going on ...^5 to this piece sis.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was outstanding and very captivated where time lay
    great to see u flowing again sis
     
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    BE THE BOMB!


    Sister Patrice, I am so fond of this high-mindedness truth of yours... :peace:
     
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    Patrice C Queen ... 2 Cheers For a Beginning
    A new Truth to the word Hope
    A new Life

    Independence for or Justice
    Justice preserves our Faith
    Faith is what Rises

    We Rise and Survive
    Where God no Longer Cries
    Salute Liberation in his Eyes
    Despair comes to halt
    So Anchorage can meet Pride


    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:

    ~PeaceandLove~
     
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    thank u queen

    time in studio was good today

    sounded like a beat poet

    patrice
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where u been my love

    thanks for the support

    patrice
     
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    We must learn from the past, but not let it keep us from making a difference in the future. May our children use those stepping stones to elevate themselves. You speak on it well, poetess.
     
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    I have a genuine deep laugh when i read your response. A laughter of release and wonder.

    sometime we have to go for the limits of our understanding and the stretch of our faith

    Patrice
     
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    looks like the beginings of another poem .....

    follow the path of your response and see where it leads


    peace
     
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