Black Poetry : captivation of her love

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She was da beauty
    of destiny within
    her smile
    captured me in
    the voice was like
    gentle wind
    felt her emotions
    from deep in

    my mental was taken
    on this vision
    her love pose'd
    soft & meek
    i am her prisioner
    of
    captivation

    the rapture
    of sway
    from her hips
    have my mind
    leannin
    dippin
    slippin
    in love
    lone to
    be into
    her soul
    and rock n'roll
    her lovin twins
    feel
    caressin

    she float on air
    body bare
    sweet golden brown
    eyez like diamonds
    glistening bright
    deeper i become
    her knight
    da Kang of love
    from above i fly
    dashin
    low
    kissin a flava
    untouched
    lip 2 lip
    warm embracin
    heated mixin
    she was da
    nightin gal of love

    if only she could hear
    my lonely heart
    and taste my kiss
    feel my body rapture
    we could sail the seas
    and cross galaxy

    from the chambers of
    my heart i whisper to
    her again !

    I know i'm in :luvv:
    she hold me in deep
    CAPTIVATION
     
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    i like ya flow here...:angel1:
     
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    thanks Angel captivation can hold a grip ya know
    but inside it lay a deep love ...
     
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    i guess that can be ...
    it was a nice drop..
    and i enjoyed the read
     
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    thankz!!
    i tell ya captivity is bad
    but feel good
     
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    do it put you air thats not there..
    makes you feel that she near..
    do it guide in the night
    when you cant see..
    do you smell her
    as far as she is...
    the touch
    the essence
    makes ya wanna play...
    just as walkin on a cloud
    that you set forth for the two of you...
    is it like dat...or deeper
     
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    hey angel much deeper

    thankz olakuoto ya words mean a lot
    i tell u captivity
     
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    deeper then blue is the sky..
    wider then the ocean..
    how deep is deep..
    can you hear her heart
    when she not there..
    can you feel her soft brown skin
    touch when she is not there..
    feel her love from above...
    is it like dat or is it deeper...
     
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    wordz can't say how deep it is
    but in da heart from da soul
    it's real
    so it's much deeper
    her love and tenderness
    her sweet shyness
    her beauty and honor
    her tears and joy
    it runs very deep even
    when i sleep
    it calls me beckon me
    asking me
    wordz can't say how
    deep it is but i know
    da love is real
     
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    real as the mountian
    you climb so high..
    she knows it is real....
    its the wordz that have
    not been discovered...
    as the flowers bud
    in the spring..
    it got freshness to it
    and a scent out of this world..
    what power it have to know that it is a real love..
    that caress your heart and hold so dear..
    i love your flows...
     
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