Black Poetry : CAPABILITY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through the galaxy
    upon darkest of night
    the starz a glo even bright
    where the horizon surrounds
    the land from the silent sounds
    a magical maze in multicolors

    Heavens rush
    and soulfully in hush
    as the waters clash
    making peace & joy
    in a determine path
    from the prayers of night
    and the power within sight
    where only he knows
    the years ahead

    Drifting around the struggle
    of day to day filler
    filter in the mist between rain
    as the rainbow reveals
    hope and faith upon faces
    i only know who's capability
    is real.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aahhhhh. Beautiful $$RICH$$.
     
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    Thank u 4EVERLUV , knowing one's true capability
    opens the doors to there realism.........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful images in this. I particularly liked the part where the virtual rainbow appears, for that is a symbol of hope, even when there doesn't seem to be any left. Lovely piece.
     
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    Awesome write Brother $$RICH$$.....Keep it coming sweets:blowkiss:
     
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    yep your capable flo on richy rich.
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I AM FLOATING ON YOUR CLOUDS I CANT WRITE TOO MUCH CUZ YOU HAVE TAKEN ME THERE AND I REALLY WANT TO ENJOY THIS

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    Thank you watz yes hope is within the bow as faith can rain beautiful.

    Thank you Spicybrown for the warmth and high lovin praise sis.

    Thank you Nevar , surely i hope so well i try to be ya words means a lot .

    Thank you sweettee for feeling me to even take a float above and within.
     
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    Beautiful write!:grouphug:
     
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    sista Cursed heart thank you so much .................