Black Poetry : Canvas

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  1. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am a canvas
    You are Picasso
    I am aroused by your..long strokes...
    Then your short...teasing ones....
    Each one causing...bursts of colors..
    You switch positions...
    Causing..divine arousal...
    My canvas molds to your brush in exctasy...
    I see the pleasure in your face....the heaviness of your breathing....
    The stroke of your brush..increasing..
    as you....
    Let out a deep from your belly sigh of relief
    As you ...
    Orgasm...
    Bright Reds...Blues..and Yellows..
    Onto my Canvas...
    It absorbs it all...
    Leaving a Glossy Finish...
    You Know I will Come Too...
    Because... The Masterpiece that was Created on my Canvas...
    Is too high To Put a Price On...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet release as it runs
    da canvas a nice picture u painted
     
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    And what a beautiful expressive piece that was created here.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    i likes this very nicely posed...
     
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    do hope you consider or decide on a membership
    to support the community and enjoy all the benefits
    your pen is very nice and flow with warmth love that
    u came within the family here ...............................
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nisa...

    Beautiful. You've got me thinking: hmmmmmmmmmm. :wink: :D

    :thanks: for sharing one of your many visions of making love...sweet love.

    :toast:
     
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    i enjoyed the scribe, but more than that i LOVED how you played with the mind of the readers on this one...............continue :geek:
     
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    my goodness..this is so so nice
    wow...tis is indeed
    a picture smooth lovely flow :)

    Blue
     
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