Black Poetry : Can't wait forever

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  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everything I do, there you are in my mind
    I see you around each corner, but I follow and cannot find
    It's so hard to go on and live life day by day
    But I've learned to push on, you molded me that way
    Now I sit here and wonder "why am i holdin onto you?"
    Cause while I'm out here stayin true, she's holdin on too
    Asked me to be your wife and still another on the side?
    But when she can't come through then all a sudden it's goodbye?

    I thought we had estalished that I was tired of the games
    Funny thing about it, I knew before you even said her name
    Well, I guess you see me as an on-going joke.
    Say you'll be fine without me; truth is your *ss would only choke
    I would've been there forever, while she's come and go
    So even though you think i feel the same, only time will show

    Now you say it's all up to me what choice you make
    But you've already gone beyond what I can take
    You've lied lie after lie for 5 years straight
    So how could you NOT expect my love to turn to hate?
    I feel bad for you cause you've thrown all of this away
    And now that you finally realize it, baby it's just too late!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A person can only take but so much. When the well runs dry he'll be missing that water. Right on point poet, I hear what you're saying.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we don't understand until our well run dry
    and that sweet pure love wave and say bye bye
    then we see all our lies and then we cry cry cry
    from the pain we stain of da heart she like a vault
    when it's open the treasure is yours but once closed
    she done ......goodness i feel u on dis one .......tyte !
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    funny how all my old lovey, dovey poems turned to hatred. :fight:
    Hmmm...hopefully i can lighten up soon. :uhh:
    I feel a little crippled after the loss of this love! :wchair:
    Glad I can share it with family :jump:
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel your pain, we all have been in certain situations. This was hot
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank was fly girl. I like it. Much props for it.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fresh venom spit right in his face
    as he hides in obvious disgrace
    put a frown on his face
    as he was blasted into outter space
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was soo good
     
  9. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya girl! It's just too late! Much love to you.
     
  10. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was most def a hot drop

    dont worry bout how all ya love poems turn to hate
    just write wat ya feel



    :climb: to tha top
     
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