Black Poetry : Can't turn a *** to a Housewife...

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  1. IlladelThug

    IlladelThug Active Member MEMBER

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    crazy chick, alwayz find a way to make me sick-
    i left u twice, u got me back wit all ur shady tricks-
    when u wuz gone i'd babysit 'cuz the baby's sick-
    i thought u stuck around for dough, i think its mainly dyck-
    but dang girl, u know u wuz the type to get laced-
    even though we shared that tight space-
    but still i always set the right pace-
    thought u got away with cheatin on me, but u always left a slight trace-
    i came home every evening just to see ur bright face-
    bruthaz hollered, but after u, even the dikes chased-
    so i think i stuck around for that *****-
    but i messed around and got gushy, but found it was cushy-
    now no more hust-lin or sellin coke-
    i made u laugh cuz i wuz tellin jokes, u cried in the past from smellin smoke-
    i gave it up, but i guess it wasnt good enuff-
    i know the hood was ruff, but still for u i stood up tuff-
    i thought u wuz the girl to be my one and only queen-
    but those were dreams cuz now u turned me 2 to a lonely fiend-
    cant turn a trick into a housewife-
    it was dyck that made u act rite, now hit the bricks cuz u my past life.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No matter how good u treat 'em or how hard U may try, U can't turn a hiddoe into a housewife.

    Gotta let 'em go.

    I can dig it.
     
  3. Khasm13

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    life lessons learned dun...
    without that...life would only be worth a crumb son...
    nice rhyme'n scheme...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sad to say but amen.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one learn from the street rider
    never home bound nice drop
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the dream time what she became was ideal ~

    Brother man, we're feeling you on this, peace.
     
  7. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAYUM!!!!! <<<Thas all i can say!!! :uhoh:
     
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    Felt you on this one here. been tryin to tell all my lil brothers this. Somthin is appealing about those "hiddoes" tho.
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang this is so true. Tricks are not housewives and they never will be. They're always going to be dipping in someone elses sugar. They will never be yours. Props given brutha.
     
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