Black Poetry : ...Can't Take This Sh*t No More...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Feb 26, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love it comes and it goes as quickly as it flows
    to abandon me merciless and cold
    how could one survive one more time alone?
    love it comes to me as quickly as it goes

    and

    i can't stand the way that it hurts me
    trembling as i beg for mercy
    crying tears that could flood a river
    killing me slowly, over and over

    I can't take this sh*t no more.
    I can't take this sh*t no more..
    I can't take this sh*t no more...
    ...I can't take this sh*t no more...
    I can't...
    Cuz i beg and i beg for mercy...
    Ohhhh i beg and i beg for mercy!
    Lord i beg and i beg for mercy!!
    ...God i beg and i beg and i plead...

    I slip into the spell as they kiss my lips
    with the poisonous trait of those tainted lips
    why do i fall more til i'm broken down
    i could undoubtedly wear loves merciless crown

    cuz i can't stand the way that it hurts me
    cutting me inside and out as it lurks me
    i cry tears that could flood a river
    i ask why over and over and over!!

    NO, NO!

    i can't take this sh*t no more
    just wish this sh*t was over
    i can't take this sh*t no more
    my heart can't take this anymore

    cuz it...

    quickly comes and goes and taunts me when i sleep
    and never lets me go as long as i shall be
    and calls me by my name and never lets me go
    to be inside loves spell, it'll never let me go!!!

    OHHHHH!

    i can't take this sh*t no more.....
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my heart tried to ache when I read this piece :crying: ...and I suddenly stoped and said to myself...oh no...my heart can't and won't take this s!!t any more...the bottom line...DON'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!! one person's LOST...is another one's GAIN.
    take care of your :heart: ...it's the only one we get.
    I feel your pain...your blessings are comming... :angel1:
    much luv to ya...queentswana
     
  3. Melody

    Melody Active Member MEMBER

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    Yeah babygurl - i got you. I can't take this **** no more and i won't! My heart is worth a lil more than some mans toy that they get tired of. *wink*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt every line and u know mine can't take it no mo!!!
    wow i am so feeling u sistah peace unto u
     
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    i likes this flow
    glad to read you again
    peace
    Angel
     
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    i'm feelin this...don't worry it will heal,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    When we get fed up, we know it, so express it. Feeling this flow.
     
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    Let it flow...Sister
    there's healing in release :grouphug:
     
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    wonderful flow sis
    release .. the flow
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    i have felt the same about love in da past
    makes you feel like your in line last
    smh...
    tyte scribe my sista...
    one love
    khasm
     
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