Black Poetry : Can't take my ....?

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  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say your tired of
    me having a life, you're not part of
    say I don't appreciate....you
    because some things I keep separate?
    can't take my [email protected] any longer
    because I don't chase you out the door
    because I don't acknowledge your drama
    the fact that most of my friends go through that monthly cycle
    and give me womanly advice...is that hard to swallow
    can't take my [email protected] no more
    because I love you, but won't jump through hoops for you
    I'm my own man, with things to do
    and I don't put family on the backburner
    to cling to you??
    Is that the [email protected] you can't follow
    Is that what you hate?
    Hanging out with a home-girl....doesn't make it a date
    I won't dismiss them cuz you don't trust them
    my friends, well, I love them
    Family, hmmmmm..... can't live without them
    and won't try to
    sometimes I enjoy what we have
    when it is what it is
    when we concentrate on us
    I can't stop living life
    burning bridges that made me
    Is that the [email protected] you hate about me
    is that why I don't appreciate thee
    for one person, that may not be
    in the picture when I wake
    to live to regret my grave mistake
    a relationship I can do without
    until the right one comes
    who accepts what I'm about
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    kente417mojo .......now u really dropped it on da real
    feeling ya scribe here keep flowing and speaking loud
    tyte scribe poet
     
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    tight flow

    I have been in this same place, kente. I am so feelin you. And you're right - just leave and hold out for one who treats you the way you deserve. Jealousy and insecurity are not worth puttin up with.
     
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    One day you'll meet someone who is on the same vibe as you and will understand, flow on.
     
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    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes definitely that person is soon to find you. don't be discourage. keep on hittin us with the lovely lines..
    BLESSINGS INTINUALLY
     
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    in time that person will show....
    likes this drop feelin the vibe
    Angel
     
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    You right, a million and one times,
    but it's not about any of these dimes
    it's your sh*t, not theirs, I won't take any longer,
    don't matter what's going on with your female fan family
    late nights, all nights . . .my perception is my reality
    not that i am blind the love i see
    but when are these times that you love me
    as the bills become paid
    or on my back i have laid?
    Whether this is true or not
    all of these nights alone i have not forgot
    staring at the phone when it should have rung
    then hearing in the streets about all your fun
    trying not to believe what I can't see
    i love you forever but baby this is me
    let's not ruin what we had, take it through the mud
    i just can't take you sh*t any longer I have to run.
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the kind words. Randee...that was cool. :huh:
    Much love family
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My love was all around
    like the air that you breathe
    kisses while you were sleep as well as when you were awake
    but I need some personal space for goodness sakes
    I never have neglected, even nights I was out
    love was always there, you were my girl no doubt
    but the 3rd degree, my ears go numb from the assault
    I never question your whereabouts
    no matter how late
    never said that your home-boys were more than that
    never questioned the brotha in the Cadillac
    never paged you to see where the hell you're at
    trust was more than that, our love kept me at ease
    won't play the jealous role, no that's not my style
    you're a free woman..just me, no ring, no child
    but if you have to leave...I'll remember what we had
    so here's the key to the closest, my home-girls packed your bags
     
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    :lol: oFF THE CHAIN MY PEOPLE , OFF THE CHAIN..... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
     
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