Black Poetry : can't see

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Feb 5, 2004.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    cant imagine why
    you were in my life
    cause all u did
    was cause me stress and strain

    i went back for more
    thinking for sure
    if i was nice you were gonna
    change

    guess i should of known
    can't change the full grown
    the writings on the wall
    but i didn't read it all

    but thats not no more
    when u look at me
    hope u like my back
    cause that's all your gonna see

    i used to love u
    now i dont
    should call for closure
    but i wont

    and its sucha tragedy
    when a girl can't see

    i used to sing
    u were my theme
    now im taking care of me
    and its sucha tragedy
    when a girl can't see.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it is ......flow on i'm feeling ya vibe
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin ya flow here
    flow on
     
  4. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this very much! Nice story.
     
  5. Bluewater

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    ah yes
    a very nice vibe
    on this flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah it is a shame...much love to you, i loved this flow.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very true...
    but it happens
    the important thing
    is that the eyes are
    open now...
    nice flow
     
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