Black Poetry : can't see clear but i'm still here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cypher, May 4, 2003.

  1. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there were times when i felt u did'nt care
    times when u weren't even there
    i needed u then as much as i need u now
    but u won't be there will u
    even when u and my moms would fight
    i had your back tho i couldn't stand the sight
    so many times i felt like the ***** in our life
    cuz i wanted to talk about our dreams and desires
    cuz i wanted to know what was inside u
    when u turned your back i fell
    didn't know where i was but u never turned to find me
    seeing me in a world of pain seemed to only help
    u gain the momemtum u needed to leave
    when we split apart i knew that i could no longer be in your heart we both tried to move on
    finding many ways to get our swerve on
    even during all of that sh#t i still couldn't help but throw a fit cuz someone else was luvin u now and all i could do was wonder how this could've happened..sh#t i put my whle heart in it
    although i must admit that my heart has been in long need of repair even before you were there
    finally we have another last chance to make things right
    with God in our corner we have hope and can now see the light but wait how come we are not connectin
    maybe that someone was more than just a friend
    u say it isn't so but hell i just don't know
    so i'm just rollin with the flow tryin not to take things so personal yeah we're just passersby now but i know what i feel and hell it's the realest thing i've had for so long
    i think **** everytime i blink i'm losing control of these **** emotions that keep whoopin on me
    the rain is poundin down so hard and i just can't seem to see things clear but i don't know what else to do so i'm still here...
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww, im truly feelin this piece........keep flowin.....much love..... :)
     
  3. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this has da depth
    all emotions
    the gentle whispers
    feel ya scribe deeply keep expressing as i listen
     
  5. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i appreciate the support $$RICH$$....hold down the fort and keep the chi-product out there....doing a bangin job...much respect
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cypher...i rarely see such passion in the written word...i can definitely relate to this piece.
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u so much for listenin to what my heart is saying...been hoping someone would...nice to know that i found so much luv from a place where passion is good....ijuswannabeheard
     
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    Nice flow you have cypher......thanks for sharing this.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't see clear, but you're here. So true. Sometimes, seeing isn't the important part. You can feel the truth, seeing is secondary.
     
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    Time will heal you and love will rein again. Love this scribe and can relate to it too.
     
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