Black Poetry : Can't Live Without...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HoneyBrown05, Jul 29, 2004.

  1. HoneyBrown05

    HoneyBrown05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My feelings for you can no one measure. The beat in my heart is like your kisses, your touch is like my lungs. I breathe you. When you had unlock the key to my soul you lived inside me. Both of our heats sang as we made love. But did you notice? The feeling was too much pleasure for you that you had missed the whole point, under the pressure.I am you and you are me, baby are you hearing me? Soul mates, a whisper in my ear, the earth quakes. The taste of your lips is like a drop of honey. My life float on by as these four white walls entraps me. Break free my spirit, save me love. Be there, together we'll fly free as birds in the wind. A tingle down my spine and I refuse to touch myself. I just sit there and yearn for you. Come complete me, lets laugh my tears away. Listen, my voice tells a story in its own. Pay attention distant lover don't leave me. Forever no one can count! Shh let me sleep in your arms. Just the smell of your scent comforts me. My love for you has no price, no regrets, baby make it official. Diamonds couldn't replace you. To me you are worth more value. Stop numbering my days with your absence, aching away my heart. I suffocate, blinding my eyes i stumble and fall deep into darkness. I am afraid lover come save me. Rescue your soul and piece back the broken puzzle. Scream if you have to and break free from bondage. Stop letting the butter flies flutter and come get me, lover. There is no one else who makes me feel the way you do. Come get me, not slowly, hurry distant lover. I am out of control ease me. Come rescue me, your someone I can't live without.
     
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    Words oozing of wants and needs. This flowed so smoothly, made me read it again.
     
  3. angelicsage

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    A raw and riveting confession of an addiction to passion and love...

    WOW...this was so real...so hard...so unashamed...

    I loved every part of it!

    Flawlessly written...but then again, a true confession of love is always…Flawless!

    Flow on poet, I’m diggin your vibe!
     
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    VERY NICE I CAN REALLY FEEL THE WANT AND NEED IN THIS PIECE
     
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    Well I sure like the way you came in the door, Welcome aboard, good to have you here. This piece is wonderful and thanks for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found within
    welcome to the place of love & peace
    welcome from above as i bless dis flow some love

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    keep flowing loving da scribe
     
  7. HoneyBrown05

    HoneyBrown05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everyone I really really appreciate the love and it has encouraged me to write some more. Thank You!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome happy to have u in flow as a part of the family
    do your thing !!scribe
     
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    Welcome to Destee Honey

    I like this flow. No one can fill a viod left by another. Swiss cheese heart is my middle name. Lovers can and will never know, how much you need them, to complete you sometimes. It's even worse when they come like theives in the night, and do a drive by love. or send a friend to let you know they know you wan them, and would like more time in thier presence. Yet somehow this gives them power. It's better sometimes to move on, and carry what love you had with you into your next adventure. Love is like swinging saloon doors, kick them open, and come out blazing. Cause it's just love calling. Some don't know they better answer. :love:
     
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    Welcome to destee.com
    i enjoyed your flow
    come check out chat
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    and flow with us on da mic

    Again welcome
    Peace
    Angel
     
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