Black Poetry : Can't let go

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UniqueOne, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving you is such a bitter sweat treat
    but i can't let you go
    loving you ain't easy believe me
    i'm still doing it though
    played and did thangs
    but i still love you so
    ran around let me down
    but i can't let you go
    felt negleted and rejected
    but afraid to let you know
    told lies nights i cried
    yet i still love you so
    broke my heart from the start
    but i can't let you go
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think alot can
    relate to this
    at times ya blind
    but you let go
    when ya feed up.....
    nice drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We let go when we realize we can, hard road to travel until then. Emotional flow, nicely posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    somehow we always let go when it's best
    tyte drop
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    broke my heart from the start
    but i can't let you go

    I know this story all too well and I like how you posed it.
     
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