Black Poetry : Cant keep you...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jul 11, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,m not a monster....
    just wanted to be with you..

    i put my head in the sand...
    afraid to see what is realy..
    in you...


    but now i know
    cant keep you.......


    I dont want to murder you..
    rather see you Alive
    see you in the light
    Shine...
    I wanna give you
    the ball ..
    and kick at it hard
    i want you to kick it
    far..
    and make you run after it...

    i,m just afraid that you wont find me.
    anymore..
    but
    i know.....

    cant keep you...


    I dont have a problem
    with letting you go....
    i more have a problem..
    with walking trough this life..
    half flesh..
    alone..
    it just doesnt
    work for me...
    not like that..
    lord didnt build me
    for that..

    but i know ..

    cant keep you...
     
  2. Locust

    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you
    relationships is too stressin
    but one day you'll find ya blessin
    i came 2 you
    one.
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must agree with Locust...well said.
     
  4. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel like I was looking in the mirror as I was reading this.
    Much Love
    Rico
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this u pose was str8 awesomeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    lovin it let da ink drip !
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    too familiar with those type feelings, trust.
    tyte flow :toast:

    nfinite
    jh.
     
  7. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful. I can deeply, deeply relate!!
    Keep on flowin! Much love to you!
     
  8. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really felt ya flow... it's a hellova feeling but the feeling i too know... keep it flowing :)

    peace
     
  9. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bless,
    I feel you. Nice flow
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks luvly all....


    libertylaida..
     
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