Black Poetry : Can't Help Fallin'

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *a verse from recent album*


    I've been through downs and ups, ups and downs
    Lookin' towards the sky still touchin' the ground...
    They said I shoulda blew up but it just wasn't the right time
    So now I find myself writin' rhymes for some peace of mind...
    I can't be categorized like the rest spittin' the most stupidest s**t
    I'm only concerned with my music and kids..
    A wise mind, old soul approachable man
    Life's a puzzle and I'm stayin' focused as much as I can..
    At times I be fallin' even though I put my all in
    More stress got me phone-less, tryin' to find my callin'...
    I'm out hustlin' hard cause my struggle is far
    from being over I'm stayin' sober puttin' my trust in God..
    Livin' paycheck to paycheck with a few funds left
    Time spent payin' bills - owin' two months rent..
    If I don't get outta this hole soon I will
    Have to resort to other ways of makin' these dollar bills..
    I'm weighing my options tryin' to avoid jail
    Maintaining my conscience while tryin' to avoid hell..
    but I

    Can't Help Fallin'
    even though it's a long waaaaay...
    Can't help fallin'
    even though its a long waaaaaay
    Long Waaaaay, Down...
    Long Waaaaay, Down...


    copyright2008

    Lurk Uno

    Thanks for reading..email me for the mp3
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fallin...

    ...isn't the calling
    for the young and the restless
    i'm guessing
    sixty-nine ways to sexing
    gotta be more to success, and
    all these highways leading to my way
    of looking at God's way
    coz His way...is the only way
    TO TRUE SUCCESS AND HAPPINESS



    the only fall from grace is the one you taste...and don't let go of.

    the river flows.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you're ahead of your time

    that you are

    yo you got mp3 and ish

    you got that in ringtone too?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tyte lyrics ......indeed in time ya shine through his eyez will reveal thee...
     
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    Hey Lurk...

    :wave:
    It has been a long time. Its good to read you again and this is a very nice (teaser) read.:)
    I would love to read more or even listen to it in its entirety. Great lyrics!

    Come ’round more often and share your verses.



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys. I will try to come by more often Coco..:em0200:
    look out for the audio link in spoken word..I just have to edit out my freinds verses so it'll take a day or two..

    whats up brother Rich...
     
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    true song from the soul. l would love to hear it and the music... seems it may be tyte.

    don't fall!!! your mind wont let you anyway.
     
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    Falling for a time, but someday rising beyond where you'd imagine. Welcome back Lurk, so good to read you again. :)
     
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