Black Poetry : Can't Get Right

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Can't get right to save yo life
    running round like cat n mice
    no matter what's da deal
    can't sho emotions nor how to feel

    Can't get right always searching for mess
    don't take time to even let it rest
    who wants to settle fo less
    when there's nothing as your best

    Can't get right from da lie to lier
    everything done is like hell n' fire
    move in da night nothing to admire
    doing wrong si your greatset desire

    so corrupted evil and stain
    a sour note just to call out ya name
    then u aim and blame
    to see u is a deadly shame

    Can't get right for nothing in da world
    this kinda action makes my toes curl
    got my head in a swril
    i'm otta here

     
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    at times it is hard to do the right thing to get the whole situation right i enjoyed this little write
     
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    yes it's crazy when a person just can't get right for nothing
    mo matter how hard u try or present the truth they just can't get it right !
    whewwwwww!!!

    I'm tired
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!




    You are on it Brother:

    Can't get right from da lie to lier
    everything done is like hell n' fire
    move in da night nothing to admire
    doing wrong is your greatset desire

     
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    I dug this... right on the money.
     
  6. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    Good having you back and posting up, thaCoolest.



     
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    Thankz brothers time we change into our positive face and bring it home !
    for God sake more power to us people !

    just sad how a lot of us just can't get right / do right and be right
    is it too much like right !!!! wow
     
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