Black Poetry : Can't Escape You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Nov 17, 2006.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    trying to remember what happened
    where you went
    and why i miss
    guilty even thinking
    now dreaming of him
    been so long
    phone shut off
    thoughts shut down
    tired of hearing that same
    ding * ding * ding . . .
    the number you dialed
    disconnected my heart
    remembering all those times
    up all night
    half drunk, half naive
    always thinking
    youd be there for me
    life moves forward and
    times sure change
    hearts wondering why
    things couldn't stay the same
    what happened and why did i go
    shut you out
    locked the door
    wondering why i left
    and what happened to friends
    we'll never have that back again
    i miss your heart and your mind
    the conversations lasting hours
    about nothing & never feeling dumb
    never being judged
    i always felt beautiful with you
    mind body soul
    now that thats through
    what should i do
    find a new best friend to take your place
    look into my son's eyes and i see your face
    I can't escape

    forever your girl
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome back Randee nice to feel ya scribe again
    sometime within the eyez of the offspring there is no escape .
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love. It's been a while since I have written, my son is 26 months now and I am having another baby in May. I think when you are pregnant emotions come pouring out. Only way I can get them out is to just type them down here.
     
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    Nice!:wine:
     
  5. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feeling this one Randee
    Missing someone...
    I can truly relate

    Thank-U so much for sharing
     
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    Although I like the entire piece, I particularly like these lines:
    "i miss your heart and your mind
    the conversations lasting hours
    about nothing & never feeling dumb
    never being judged
    i always felt beautiful with you"
    It's hard not to have someone in your life, that can made you feel this way. Well posed scribe, welcome back.
     
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    Hi Randee
    Oh my goodness I just wanted sigh
    We all can relate from the flow of your poem
    And that missing feeling that just won't let up
    Much love sis.
    Your flow is deeply felt.

    Peace & Love
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel u on this.
    I can relate to every word.
    Very noce work poet.
     
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