Black Poetry : Can't do it ,Not to Him

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I once felt the greatest pleasure of my life
    To be followed by the greatest pain
    After my tears stopped and my smile showed
    I realized my losses and what I had to gain

    I tried to play the love game
    In the same way that it played me
    Had me strung out on passionate love
    So much that I was too [email protected] blind to see

    I peeped him from afar a few months after
    And we got to know each other through friends
    I started off mean as hell, he tried to run game
    Then we kicked it off as close friends

    Darn, I told him a lot of thing i didn't tell my own peeps
    I was just comfortable like that
    But I NEVER told him about my past
    it wasn't going down like that

    But one thing led to another,
    I found myself in his bed
    And though it took us a while to get there
    I had such a feeling of dread

    That man made love to me....
    He made love to my body and caressed my mind
    He kissed, held, and talked to me
    I cried sliently when he faced me from behind

    I didn't get caught up like that last time
    It wasn't even close to it
    I blew him off in everyway
    I treated him like complete ****

    And to me, I kept thinking cut him off
    I shut off total communication
    But hey, I just didn't want to get hurt again!
    Like anybody else in my situation

    I wanted to hurt him in the way that K had hurt me
    To me, it wasn't fair in the way I had been done
    I didn't deserve how my first love treated me
    I wanted to do the same to someone

    But....I couldn't even do it anymore
    To someone who had my total affection
    I loved him totally and complete
    I didn't want to push him in another's direction

    Took me a while,but I am with my friend
    Not in a relationship,we just chill
    And if feelings get too intense one day
    We'll just keep it real

    I almost lost the one for me
    Because I was so distant to him
    My love shined through my stupid ways
    I couldn't do it.....not to him
     
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    i like dis baby girl well down
    posed just right....just an:angel1: view...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed the emotions flowed here
    and sometime we all have that twisted feelin
    and think on the past of hurt & pain
    feeling lost and afraid to mend
    but in the end we see wit third eye what one mean
    i know all this so well ....say what u feel keep it real
    nice drop of emotions :heart: ya heart is beautiful u didn't do it .
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rich and blkangel...your replies mean so much:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sistah Queen
    keep doing as u do and
    be who u are :spin:
     
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    i second that..
    do yo thang just
    be true to you..
    your welcome...
    i likes yo flow
     
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    NICE....

    I LOVE it when I can feel the words....Nice. I am feeling it.
     
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    thank you fam:)
     
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    indeed
    sister Swt
    seeing through your eyes
    feeling you on this flow
    watching you grow.
    wonderful
    this was so good
    Peace
     
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    SwtT, I know I've said it before, but it's so nice to watch you grow right before our eyes. Thanks for letting us in.
     
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