Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cant Die Yet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by oldsoul, Mar 8, 2006.

  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Cant Die Yet

    I cant die till I can pay for my funeral
    At least that’s according to the story that I heard
    If death comes to take me, then I cannot go
    And the story teller is known to be good at his word.

    I cant expire till I pay off all my debts
    At least that is how I heard the story goes
    If death comes for me, debt holds him back
    Why this seems to work, that nobody knows.

    I cant leave here till I’m paid up in full
    At least that’s the way that the story unfolds
    If death comes to get me, my debts wont let me go
    And this becomes just another legend thats untold.

    --©3/3/06--
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I have to wait till my depts is paid...
    then rest assure, I'll never get layed!

    If I stick around till I've paid all my dues...
    I'll still be around, too see many, many you's

    So many will go, so many will even forget...
    I'll still be here, trying to settle my dept!
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved the flo oldsoul keep them flo's coming.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this unsold
    story told as it unfold
    is reality bold
    so i'm told due to death.

    this was awesomely tyte drop bruh
     
  5. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'M FEELING THIS ONE HOT FLOW KEEP DOING YOUR THING CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.
     
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