Black Poetry : cant breath

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my heart is closed
    not letting it open
    anymore…
    i cant breath....
    we had a fight now its like we are
    at distance...
    my heart hurts....
    you wont even pick up
    the phone
    to call …
    maybe it wasn’t meant to be…
    I know you stop lovin me
    sometime ago….
    i cant breath this anymore...
    Things have changed…
    the day I fear
    just came to be…
    now alone again
    cant breath
    don’t want to breath….
    You made that change in me
    its hard to deal....
    you had the best of me....
    Now you don’t love me anymore…
    We were to be married
    Now that dream is gone…
    What a dream….you promised to give
    it to me all..and i believed you...
    now your gone…
    cant catch my breath
    For what you felt is no longer there…
    My love was wasted on a lie…
    Now I am here dealin with it again…
    i think i just die....
    empty
    alone
    and
    blue
    a blkangel thang...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...emotion is very real in here
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight scribe angel
    feeling the vibes
    much love
    Peace
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very hearfelt piece.
    i alredsy hear the music to this one


    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da heart speaking
    feel ya
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes it is speakin...
    its tell a story
    thats way from done..
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank all you for taken time and reading...
     
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    You must breath again. To continue the love you have to give. Cheating only yourself. While the loser that left is left out in the cold.

    Very NIce MzBlkangel.. keep it flowing
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you HODEE...
     
  10. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt this very emotional piece in my soul..... especially the part when wrote "I know you stop lovin me sometime ago"..... dayum.. i felt that line... in my spine......... tyte flow, my sista...
     
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