Black Poetry : Can't believe you would try me like that

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I come in the house from hanging with my girl
    Close the door and you bringing down my world
    Alll in my face talkin some stuff about what ou don' heard
    Pushin me back out the door, dang is this you or a fronter
    cause you causing a scene in front of the neighbors
    Accusing me of some stuff like I don' even know nor
    Care about cause you the only man for me
    Can't believe you would try me like that, why you tryin me?
    I've always been down for you, what year is this? three?
    Three fukkin years, now you don't fukkin believe me?
    I'm heated man, let go of me
    Cryin right now wouldn't even ease me
    I Can't even believe you would try me like that
    If you let me go I ain't comin back
    I'm your ride or die chick, soon to be wifey
    And now you think I'm cheatin........whoa that's news to me

    Who held you down when you ain't have no job, who took on two?
    When you tried to be a trap *****, who put the house up to bail you out boo?
    If that ain't love I don't know what is, what would make you think I would fukkin cheat on you?
    I don' fought many ******* over you
    Through thick and thin, I ain't never thought of leaving you
    I was pregnant with your child, I gave it up for you
    What other ***** could ever compare to you?

    I thought our love was thicker than this
    What would make you think I would drive another ***** around in our car when you bought this
    Yea, yo boy was a witness
    But he told you a lie, plus that ain't his business
    The only person in our car was me and Kenya, we went to Wendy's
    A few boys rolled up but I ain't talk, the radio kept me busy
    you know me, why are we even going through this
    Our love must not be strong if you str8 tryin me like this

    If you ain't got edvidence
    about where I went
    Then cheatin I ain't
    And leaving I can't
    Fukk it I can't
    Stop pushing my way back in
    Faithful I been
    Men unseen
    You the only one for me
    But if you gon be like that
    Well I guess you never had my back
    And I like that
    The true colors are out now, can't believe you would try me like that
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was really like this piece poet
    people try all kind of things in life
    nice expression of your feelings
    ur poetry is elevating for real
    7/10
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often one stand accused fussin leaves da heart abused
    from the riff of another tongue , wording it all wrong
    make u wonder do you really belong when u been down
    with him so long .

    i feel you sista truely i do i know what u mean fo real
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak that truth like it is
    ause sooner or later he gottat learn some of his friends best interest ain't all about his, and if he can't trust then he don't deserve i hate to say it but sometimes they don'y get it til you kick them to the curb
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea poet

    some dudes are insecure
    and if they handling their "business"
    properly they wouldn't have to worry about their woman straying
    and he must know his woman too, because she might not be the type to go with anything

    feeling your dilemma
     
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    Have to wonder if he believes his boy more than you, or if he is just too afraid of the possibility of being hurt. Where was his boy when he needed someone to take up the slack? His choice. As always, I like the way you speak your mind in flow.
     
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