Black Poetry : Candy Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Feb 20, 2002.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    you're my candy rain
    chocolaty and sweet

    you're my candy rain
    sweeping me off my feet

    you're my candy rain
    wild yet untamed

    you're my candy rain
    the way you say my name

    you're my candy rain
    chocolaty and sweet

    you're my candy rain
    knocking me off my feet

    you're my candy rain
    wild yet untamed

    you're my candy rain
    sparking hot red flames

    you're my candy rain
    chocolaty and sweet

    you're my candy rain
    sweeping me off my feet

    you're my candy rain
    mild yet unchanged

    you're my candy rain
    the way you say my name

    you're my candy rain

    you're my candy rain

    you are my candy rain






    :kiss: lana1287 productions :kiss:
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is too sweet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    finger lickin good
    i'll be ya candy man
    chocolate bar
    full of sweetness
    inside ya RICHness!

    i love dis one PD sis.... ya bout to give me a sweet tooth
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow.
    keep um coming
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pd

    Cute and lovely flo. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    I can almost hear the guitar solo
    in the middle of this
    SONG
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Bishop,

    you managed to beat Rich
    1st this morning huh :lol:

    thanx 4 the read

    Richy Rich,

    i concur like KFC
    "finger lickin' good" :lol:

    thanx 4 stoppin'

    lonelypoet,

    the same 2 u welcome :wave:

    Coco,

    :lol: thanx 4 stoppin'

    UL,

    i can see you
    dancing in the middle
    of the flo' :lol:

    thanx 4 the read

    peacenlove fam

    pd :)
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD.....do I sense love in
    tha air or are you just feelin good...
    this is some candy sweet vibin..
    thanx 4 sharin.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  9. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    mayB springtime is in the air

    :lol:

    thanx for stoppin'

    pd
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD.


    ...ummm... sis-in-law... ummm...
    he ain't really dat sweet!! is he? :lol:

    this was absolute-ly adorable...
    now i wanna hear you sang it!! :D

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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