Black Poetry : Candy Moon

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CANDY MOON
    ((((((((((()))))))))))

    Nothing was beneath her
    Listen to the speaker ~
    She was my Lolita
    Rock his world
    Candy girl...

    Fast times would
    Intrigue her...
    He became the teacher
    Graded on the curve
    On the move,
    With Candy Moon

    Hottie from the cradle
    Sexy, crazy, able
    Pretty concave navel
    We moved the crowd
    Comin' (((loud)))

    Pin-up Betty Grable
    Kept me in the stable
    Sent him to the pen
    To do the time,
    For the crime

    Nothing was beneath her
    Listen to the speaker
    Something of a geezer
    Girls of his own,
    Longing to bone

    Daddy's in a tizzy
    Missy, getting busy
    Perverts looming large
    For Candy Moon,
    Sure is doomed



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dude...
    man this hit home man...
    i used to know dis gurl named candy
    and dis was **** near her...
    get outa my head man...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i knew her too
    u took me back there in da
    candy tymes zone
    tyte raw scribe
     
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    Daddy's in a tizzy
    Missy, getting busy
    Perverts looming large
    For Candy Moon,
    Sure is doomed

    1poet............you definitely know to capture my attention! This was great!
     
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    Ditto on angelic's comment...u gotz a way wit the wordz fa sho :)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks family!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Encore! (More Love...)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is

    This is so real.
    there are many "Candy Moons"

    Great piece!

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    OOO, this is mad tight! :D
     
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    Thank You

    Cocobutterskyn, & Gempis- a warm thank you!
     
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