Black Poetry : Candy Coated Crackhead Dreams

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like candy coated crack head dreams,
    What you see is pure imagery.
    While others who’s images seemed
    bright, Shiny and new,
    have all faded away.

    While me,
    I’m here still reflecting every God given hue,
    So darn real, you don’t know what to do.

    You asked for me didn’t you?
    A woman that’s strong, and true.
    You prayed to God for me.
    What? You thought I never knew.

    You see, you wanted me.
    I hand picked you,

    Perfection is what we achieve;
    When we are together.

    Apart,
    You carry my heart,
    I just wanted you to love me
    From the very first start.

    Maybe this is my fantasy,
    You and me,
    Becoming we..
    If it is, please!
    Put me out of my misery,

    Like candy coated crack head dreams,
    What you see is imagery,
    You’ll see,
    When the only real woman left,
    Is in the memories,
    You had of me.

    :happens:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pining that bit ain't gonna get it

    Got it... I want it now!

    Gone with your bad self, girl.
     
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    I'm lovin your in your face style here. Some folks have Eden right in their hands, and drop it from some foolish mirage. This was tight poet, flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwww
    yummy give it to me
    what a treat this was tyte !!!!!
     
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    Dang this is tight, and I do feel what you're sayin. Break it down.
     
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    Thanks for hitting us with the mental im tired of listening to the instrumental. Another drop from that bad Sista look out she got a pen......
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :fairy: Thank you , im glad you all felt what i was saying.. everyone Ive ever known has always had that one person, that was always there for them and would give an arm if needed, but I myself never thought I would become that person. Nor am i pleased to be, but life throws us a curveball.. all i can do is make a homerun! :fairy:
     
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    re: Candy

    Very powerful write.
     
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    this stanza drove it home
    one never misses the well
    until the well runs dry :swim:

    keep flowin poet
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pOETRYMAMA, ANGELICSAGE.. THANK YALL FOR THE LOVE.. I HAVE A CRUCIAL WRITERS BLOCK RITE NOW, SO ALL IS APPRECIATED. :insane:
     
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