Black Poetry : Candles of Three and Three Roses

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Burning in da light
    of u and me
    these candles of three

    The first one lit
    by my heart
    within our love
    that has start

    On this wave of bliss
    felt from our faithful kiss

    Second one lit
    in depth of fear
    we over came
    to share and shield a tear

    Deep in the soul
    our love we bare
    for the warth of tender care
    and what we found wasn't fair

    Third one lit upon our flyte
    upon the glow of glisting light
    to shower our spirit cross da night
    for a future so bright

    One sweet Red rose
    for our love
    my heart pose

    In the fulfillment of joy
    and the grace of our existance
    make it dewell

    Second rose of sweet pink
    to cling our foreverness
    in the vessel of one link

    That u may feel my inner beings
    my mental and the cascading
    love of expression in da morrow

    Third rose of purple passion
    beyond the lust but affection
    of us together unconditionally

    As long as u carry the light
    and continue to love
    they will burn in health and
    never wilt or fade but remain
    eternally

    Your my candle of flames
    dat burns deep inside my soul
    and the rose of my heart i treasure
    with every living measure

    may we journey into this life & love ​


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    $$RICH$$.......

    My love is your burning candle,

    tell me sweetness can you handle,

    the way it drips when lit ablaze,

    flickering through the night, sending your mind into a craze,

    the hypnotizing scent of Hazelnut Cream,

    knocks ya socks off, pinch yourself, this is not a dream,

    nor a test of the "ain't-her-juicy" broadcast system,

    forget the other two candles, I light your path when the others wear dim,

    ok now $$RICH$$...... wipe the smile from your face,

    job done well, you kept my fire burning... right down to the ~base~



    :flame: :kiss: :flame:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Under the beauty
    you depth and compassion
    i stand at the helms
    of your light
    with unconditional love
    to weather all u pose
    and upon this rose
    as the candle burn bright
    yes i can withstand
    to handle thee
    cometh upon me sweetly
    as i mesmerize u tenderly

    let me smile a bit more
    to bring u something
    deep down from da core
    i am that i am that we can be
    allow me, my fire of glist
    spicybrown i am the above
    treasure to be measured
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...........

    c'mon suga.....mesmerize me then,

    gaze into my eyes, give me a :smooch: ,let the games begin,

    make the first move, while I keep score,

    you caress my mental with that floetry I soo adore,

    your treasure can't be measured, for its worth surpasses eternity,

    like a butterfly in its cocoon stage, unleash that miracle upon me,

    be my genie, grant me my wish,

    continuez faire, que vous faites le mieux, ta poesie est magnifique
    keep on doing what you do best, your poetry is tha ish!


    :welldone: :love:
     
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    Beautiful concept, how romantic. Very nice flow back from spicy. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    ahhh ! Thank u watz for the beautiful words to my heart !

    Spicybrown....................
    My eyes are the window inside ya soul
    i'm the warmth when u feeling cold
    the glist of rapture depth i mold
    the verse of reasons sought to be told

    Keepin score u can't do
    when this love come for u
    softly kiss u under cherry moon
    to rock ya body into my groove
    caress tenderly wit handz so smooth
    ur open up for da next move

    Every step of light da candle burn
    will leave ya heart deep to yearn
    ya like my tasty freeze
    and the cream to my dreamz
    bedded in roses and sensual steam

    whatever u desire and wish upon
    my love will bring
    ya like the apple of my eye
    the beauty i lone up in da sky
    ya the mix to my flava
    da queen my soul now savor

    ad vi.vum ae.quo ani.mo `a la belle etoile alis vo.lat pro.pri.is a l'im.pro.viste
    means
    to the life with even mind under beautiful stars in open air at night with her own wings
    to my heart unexpectedly .
     
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    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another Excellent piece Rich! And again I loved the flow, which is sharp, exact and purposeful.

    Great work!

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    Coming from the great Legendof_1_spirt thank u very much
     
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    Wow brother $$RICH$$
    That was deep as hell
    I loved the three roses
    Journey that was serious
    Much Love
     
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    Thankz upon each rose pose a mean
    beside each candle dat burns through
    da glass of heart , fear and flyte to a
    new start a new love under faith.........
     
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