Black Poetry : CANDLES OF LOVE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Flickering beam
    dancin dream
    candles of love
    heartbeats sing
    rump-o-thump
    singing in motions
    of a love's devotion
    stroke after stroke
    caressin as i lit da
    candles glow

    first one lit off my
    caressin heart
    within this burning
    love we start
    on a bliss
    through our faithful
    kiss of twist

    second one lit from fear
    to open our eyes my dear
    through a helpful tear
    cause we know what's fair
    and the burning flickering
    gentle lovin of care

    third one lit from my soul
    to have and forever hold
    inside our love beauty
    the grace we face
    da compromised trace
    to our humble secret place

    forth one lit in respect
    to honor and never forget
    to comfort & compelled
    in our direct love spell
    deep in my foreverness
    you shall always dewell

    fifth one lit to thy creator
    of creational love and to
    your mother who birth u
    to my belove and to the
    master above these candles
    burn in radiant essence
    warmth of affection
    and deep eternality
    da candles of compassion
    our love symbol flames of
    L . O . V . E .
    :hearts2: :hearts1: :blowkiss: :love: :blowkiss: :hearts1: :hearts2:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That so sweet
    I think I'm gonna cry!!
     
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    Nice drop :grin:
     
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    awesome flowing mental is engaged in some serious love vibe to a perfect romance this was jus wow...wishing for my own poem one day like this full of love and beauty of two souls wow Peace Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sweet baby face .....when love comes it pours in a shine so divine

    thankz Theone ......love is grand and beautiful

    thankz Angel ........indeed love's dorr is open and the wordz pen will be
    yo ear full of sweetness behold and aim high forth love on ya side dear.

    Thankz a million family as expression of love floating cross the sky
    where my heart continues to fly .....peace & harmony in love
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First one ...
    Bounce from your heart, and touched bases with mines
    what a joy to see ...two hearts intwine

    Second one ...
    See the tear, drop from my face?
    in fear that another...will soon take my place

    Third one ...
    Our spirits wild ...will forever run
    the moment our "souls" became as one

    Forth one ...
    Oh, respect is always high on my list
    sends my heart ...in a world of bliss

    Fifth one ...
    We're both blessed with this awesome love
    that can only be granted from ...God above​
     
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    I loved the whole piece but these lines in particular caught my eye:

    "fifth one lit to thy creator
    of creational love and to
    your mother who birth u
    to my belove and to the
    master above these candles
    burn in radiant essence
    warmth of affection
    and deep eternality
    da candles of compassion
    our love symbol flames of
    L . O . V . E ."

    Quite touching, giving thanks to the Lord above and to the woman who gave birth to such a soul, this was awfully sweet. Flow on brotha poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    queentswana........these candles of glow
    is the beauty of u and me the radiant shine
    of two divine soul which shall burn in holyness
    for thy Father promise us this renewed love

    go give him a kiss and hug and warm love
    Thank u sista for the beautiful 5 candles to remind me again
    how so worthy a woman truely mean to man.


    WATZ .....................
    Thank you a million tymes as love shine
    from the grace of thy Father above and
    thy earthly Mother for beauty and warmth
    of a woman to treasure .
     
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    each candle a meaning of love a new venture a solid rapture
    it's divine and bring compassionate enterwind to dine on .....
     
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