Black Poetry : CANDLE LIGHT DINNER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tonight dinner made fo two
    candle light just me and you
    soft sensual sweet music
    lights low as our hearts lose it

    Let me feed you my deep passion
    and let you taste what's made fo you
    butta rolls and mac&cheese
    chop steak baked potato squeeze

    sipping sparkling table wine & lime
    bodies on a collission as we begin to grin
    inside my cottage under candle light tyme
    hot ready lips partake wit mine

    Love meets us in da middle
    like it was da seat filler
    candles start ta flicker and dance
    while we bond to sexy romance

    Slowly caressin every cruve
    deep spoken poetic words
    I'm touching yours, U touching mines
    having a feast creating a love crime

    Inside da depth of extreme
    compassionate bliss as i place'd da ring
    covered inside a velvet box
    upon ya finger just as i hit da spot

    seven candles burning in groove
    rose pedtals line da flo set da mood
    caressin ya body as we dance smooth
    while making sweet romantic moves

    from this candle light dinner
    inside da glasshouse summer-room spinner
    compromise to my heart ya my winner
    A queen a love my friend
     
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    This is the loveliest poem I've ever read. It drew tears. (smile)
     
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    Big thankz sister for the visit and read as my passion drives :heart::luv::heart:
     
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    Love Made n Paradise, Hot then cold but always fullfiling!
     
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    it's what love do and about but nothing if no one
    to share it all with but leaves a fullfilling taste yes
    thank you my sistah for da visit inside my passion
     
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    (smile)
     
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    Candles burning bright
    dancin in delight
    softly the flames aglow
    thankz everyone so
     
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