Black Poetry : CANDI RAIN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Apr 27, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This drop is dedicated to our member " CandizSoSweet "
    :spinstar: Welcome to Destee Candi. :spinstar:




    Combination rain drops.
    Come down on me.
    Warm drops one after another pound at my sprit, and heart.
    Making me think of you.

    Your voice is like this.
    When u sing heavens part.
    Take me away.

    Your smile is as warm as those drops, tugging at my heart.
    Don’t ever stop you are my intensive pounding inspirational drop.

    Warm days, cool days, all are the same, drop that rain on me.
    Soak me up and down, wet me to the bone.
    I don’t want to live without your warm drops on my mind.

    Rainy days make me happier than most, sunshine dries me up.
    Waiting for you my heart string love.

    Pounding rain.
    Blowing rain.

    Come down on me.
    Each drop making its own unique sound.
    A music all its own.

    Pounding down on a sheet of tin, drop that love on me again and again.
    I hear you.
    Loud and clear.

    You’re in the foreground
    Everyone else

    All other sounds are moved easily to the rear.
    Music, sweet music.
    Making me think of you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 sweet & beautiful tribute to a sistah
    bruh ! flow head on
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HHHHHOOOOOOODDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEEEEEE *sigh* lol this was beautiful, lovly, flow on
    :grin: :heart:
    -story
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "My love do you ever dream of candy coated rain drops"LOL I love this piece such a sweet and tender dedication :wink:
     
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    Gee, what a tender dedication laced with peaceful images of rain.
     
  6. angelicsage

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    aaaawe, this is so sweet...
    I suppose she hasnt' seen it yet...

    but Lord knows...the child can sing...

    I've heard her...and she has a beautiful voice...

    and it's just that...Candi Rain...


    Very nice, Hodee
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ
    this was tight
    you out did ya self
    my brother
    i know candi blushing and everythang..wow
    love it
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful, nice flow... I'm certian it will be appreciated
     
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    VERY NICE DROP BROTHER HODEE!!!!
    I LIKE THE FLOW!!!!

















    :toast:
     
  10. CandizSoSweet

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    :jawdrop::eek:hmy::luv:
    Oh man......wow, i'm at a loss for words.... :blush: That was sooooo beautiful!! Words can't express how appreciative I am of having such a beautiful piece of work dedicated to me. That was .....wow Brotha Hodeee :kiss:*muah*:kiss: Thank you sooooo much :bowdown: That was awesome. lol @ tryin' to channel my poetic side.....I think it's workin' :thanks:
     
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