Black Poetry : can you...?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Sep 4, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you tell me
    You’d LOVE me
    From now ‘til whenever
    And never
    Think of leaving me
    {even on our worse day}

    -----CAN YOU-----

    Can you PROMISE me
    A DRAMA-FREE environment
    With no incidents of
    “HE SAID…SHE SAID”
    Bullshyt
    And
    Show a brutha some love
    From
    a.m.
    to
    p.m.

    -----CAN YOU-----

    Is anytime aiight
    To get our groove thang on
    Is there such a thing as
    Staying in it TOO LONG?

    I just wanna know.:)

    Can you help me
    When I’m down and out
    Or, anytime I’m around
    To see the error of my ways
    CAN YOU GIVE ME FOREPLAY
    You know…like
    Going down town
    Or
    Twirling my nipples ‘round
    As you gently massage my insides
    Out.

    No doubt
    You’re up to the task
    Your mounds of joy
    And river of pleasure
    Speaks for themselves

    Can you love me
    Like you’re supposed to
    …treat me like the man
    you want me to be

    WILL YOU BE TRUE TO ME?

    Will you give me the
    R E S P E C T
    I’m due {as a man}
    Can you comprehend this place I’m in

    -----CAN YOU-----

    Do you love me?
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...can you withstand time and continue to lay it down...make him feel like a man and...and...be true...and make her feel like a woman too...but throughout time...that's the key brotherman...throughout time.

    good piece baller.
     
  3. SistaMoon

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    OOH WEE! I HEAR YA BROTHA!!!
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sherykah...my smile was lost in the transfer...leaving me with J. that's who J is...and J has been corrected.:)

    would you treat me GOOD
    as only Sherykah could
    would you give me a place to lay my head
    a goose down pillow...in the middle of your bed
    would you let me rest...just for a minute
    NO...i'm not flirting
    NOT trying to go up in it

    I JUST NEED SOME REST.

    my lady in red...i am one way...everyday...unpredictable. i've been that way for forty-four years...a proven commodity. YES...my lady is always treated like the QUEEN she is.:)

    SistaMoon...gotta let you know that i love that name...as well as the flow of you.:)

    THANKS for reading...and the love.
     
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    well... i can... but will you... umm... nevamind! :lol:

    as usual... you are doin' the **** thing.
    your words always bring to mind the most
    delicious thing... :) thanks for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww ****!!!

    Im puttin all my money on Baller!!! True Talent dog!!! Brilliant poet!

    Reas
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somethin bout

    when a man asks, like this...

    mercy!

    alyce
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne...i mean {e-lay-n...e.:)}...forget the nevamind thang...we got some measuring to do...unless that wasn't the delicious thing that came to mind.:)

    Reas...i've seen you drop serious love, my brutha...i'm just trying to be like you.

    Ms A....well...i mean...awhhh shucks.

    THANKS for reading.
     
  9. Kitana

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    who could resist a man who promises utopia..

    and asks the question so sweetly....

    k
     
  10. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU, Kitana...for reading...and for the beautiful reply.:)