Black Poetry : Can You?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jun 1, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you imagine?
    The naked form of a mortal man,
    embraced by the night?
    Made love too by the earth,
    placed in a bath of constellations
    and stellar elevations?
    Can you imagine?
    The naked form of a mortal man,
    skin, the color of smoked honey?
    Eyes, a dark shade of cocoa brown,
    and breath as sweet as a cool north wind?
    Can you imagine?
    The naked form of a mortal man,
    embraced by the essence of the Divine and
    created in his direct image through and through?
    Can you sense the greatness and destiny
    in this man's diposition? This man's regal bearing? The
    way he speaks and the gestures of his hands?
    Can you detect the power of his words and bask in
    the prophetic insight of this "inspired mouthpiece" for God?
    Can you feel it?
    Can you imagine?
    Can you embrace it?
    Can you walk with his God-inspired vision toward eternity?
    Can you?
    Can you accept and sense the beauty and divine touch of
    The Infinite and All-powerful upon this mortal man's life?
    Can you embrace all of his imperfections and faults along with
    his good deeds?
    If you can, then you have truly embraced me, God's servant, mouthpiece;
    PropheticNsyght!

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    The 93 rd year, 4th month and 14th day.
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  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: This was deep I liek this flow foreal
    flow on poet :rolling:
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much beautiful. I appreciate your love more than you know.
     
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    Again...Welcome

    I can and I did...Wonderful, Wonderful, Peace...

    there were so many elements to this work of art...
    that I loved...too many to name or quote...
    but know...Your poetry has made an entrance
    to be noticed with me...Excellent Read
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much ma. I am deeply flattered by YOU *bows* God bless you and thank you once again.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome, you walk through like one who has a strong cosmic force. Keep flowing, I'll keep reading.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much beautiful. God bless