Black Poetry : CAN YOU

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by turtle1, Apr 19, 2004.

  1. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY...........

    CAN YOU SEE........

    CAN YOU SEE MY HEART POURING
    OPEN WITH ENDLESS LOVE
    CAN YOU SEE HOW MUCH I WANT YOU
    NEED YOU
    HOW I WANT TO HOLD YOUR BODY NEXT TO MINE
    HOW I WANT TO KISS YOUR TENDER LIPS
    KISS YOUR SILKY NECK
    AS I WHISPER IN YOUR EAR

    I WANT YOU.....

    I NEED YOU......

    CAN YOU FEEL MY EXCITEMENT
    WHEN YOU RUB AGAINST MY BODY
    WHEN YOU COME CLOSER THAN CLOSE
    CAN YOU HEAR THE WORDS
    WHEN I LOOK INTO YOUR EYES.......
    AND TELL YOU.....

    I WANT YOU........

    I NEED YOU.........

    I GOT TO HAVE YOU.......

    CAN YOU TELL BY THE WAY I LOOK AT YOU
    CAN YOU TELL HOW MY EYES SHINE AS YOU ENTER THE ROOM
    STARING AT A VISION BEYOND BEAUTY
    CAN YOU SENSE WHAT MY HEART IS TELLING YOU.......

    SHOWING YOU........

    HOW IT WANTS YOUR LOVE INSIDE
    HOW IT WANTS TO INTERTWINE
    AND TELL YOUR SOUL

    I WANT YOU.......

    I NEED YOU........

    I GOT TO HAVE YOU.........


    I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel it I can feel it. LOL
    I like this drop alot. Got me feeiling all
    Gentle. LMAO!!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :jumping:
    Hey Poet of the week
    feelin ya flow
    nice scrible
    love it
    feeling it yes indeed
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she better feel all dis love poppin off here
    tyte brutha T......poet of da week scribe on
    mo mo mo!!!!
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww..this is sweet...i klike..
    :heart:
    -story
     
  6. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU FAM!!!!! IT FEELS GOOD TO HAVE THE SUPPORT OF FAMILY!!!




    MUCH LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to see you
    flowing again brother...

    Nice work
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wear youre crown brother its youre week and shine... :spinn:


    turtle :spinn: spin like a Ninjaturle poet! lol



    :look:And again this is also a beautifull piece....


    Keep writing



    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
  9. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS SAGE AND LIBERTY!!!!!!
    MUCH LOVE TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! :angel1:
     
  10. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice, i love this