Black Poetry : CAN YOU?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Nov 14, 2003.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    look at this flow
    and tell me truthfully
    that u understand.
    don't reply about 2 words
    or less
    tell me am i not able to flow-or can.
    look at me physically
    and tell me am i really fat
    or just overweight.
    don't say what that got to do with anything
    cuz it deals with alot
    like my faith.
    cuz you gotta look past this face
    and pass everything else
    to tell me what i am to you.
    and if you can't look past this
    then apparently you can't see
    thru.
    the glass that you classify me as
    someone that appears to be someone i'm not
    but really someone else.
    so tell me now
    can you feel me
    can you see me
    can you truthfully say you care?
    or don't you understand
    too many powerful words being used
    don't worry about that
    just tell me
    can you feel me
    the way i feel you..............
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah gurl...get him to see YOU not the package cause that beez nothin but a bonus :)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it all be known !!
    indeed this speak out clear
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    mm...mm...mm....tell it like it t. i. is. :D

    You have a very nice flow. Keep up the great work. You can only get better...and better, young lady. :D

    :toast:
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I lke I like

    A open mind is always more "BEAUTIFUL" than blind eyes...nice drip!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak loud and clear...
    flow on girl..
    like yo stlye :angel1:
     
  7. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this...thats how men r wit me. jus see my face & body. once they c past that they kno im 1 in a million! 4 real i can relate
    GOD BLESS :angel1: