Black Poetry : Can You See ?

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  1. People_Power

    People_Power Member MEMBER

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    Can You See?

    If I am not what I dream but I am what I wake, is it better not to sleep then to lay still awake.
    If I’m not what I hope but I’m judged on what I take , dose humanity have any right to celebrate.
    Is it better to wear rubber joggers then Soul Leather slippers?
    Simple and naked compared to Complicated and fake.
    To Judge is to not tolerate, but to accept is to isolate
    To hate is to fear to love is to appreciate
    Concepts are will but to center is to miscalculate
    So how can a blind man see in a world that’s dark?
    So how dose a seeing man find love in his heart?
    If to push is to allow take and to take is to not give
    Why isn’t their balance to allow collapse?

    Perhaps the truth is far more then what I realize, but is that any reason to remain blind.
    Curiosity killed the cat and it killed me, but now I have to pick myself up eventually. It is better to of loved then not at all but what is the point of love if you’re the only one knocking on people’s doors? To wear shades is to block the sun or is it a sign of a gift and your acknowledgment I’m too blind to want one.


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  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave:
    this is a very nice flow
    feeling your lines
    on this thoughts
    nice drop
    flow onward
    feeling this
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, loving this deeply worded introspective scribe, flow on.
     
  4. People_Power

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    thanks guys

    hey guys

    must admited i didnt think it was any good myself , but thanks


    cheers
    peeps
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this scribe
    deeply posed
    flow on
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribing poet
     
  7. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is indeed a mater piece
    very lovely naked raw untamed