Black Poetry : Can you Pt 2

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  1. MzBlkAngel

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    My future comes one day at a time
    Will our friendship and love grow one day at a time?
    Wondering what is happening to us....

    Will it be or will it not...

    Do you know I care…I dream and wish
    Every night we grow closer
    Enjoying the conversation
    The stimulation….wanting more
    I understand all you are going through
    Just want to know
    Can we evolve like the moon and sun?
    Beam like a glisten star…Dance in a storm
    Heal when we need too…
    Will you…
    Disappear like love was not there...As if we never meet?

    Will you stick around when it get rough?
    Can you despite my wrongs, take me and love me
    …………… Through all my pain?
    See…I know I can hold your hand
    So can you hold mine in the same?
    Be my protector
    My King
    Soul holder
    Heart comforter
    My pleaser releaser
    Raise and take my hand
    Moreover, lead me through the fire
    Pass the storm…when I can’t?
    Will you be there….in the midst of the storm or will you
    …turn your back?

    Will you really love me through all my pain?
    Quick to give and slow to take
    Fury like a lion and calm as the sea
    Real like the sky peaceful and gentle as a dove
    I have a lot of love to share
    …and I want to try to share it with you
    Mate in the spirit and touch soul to soul
    Until the Divine calls you home
    I been through the hell of the storm
    But raising back up
    …………….For you
    Opening to something new
    I want to try again
    Going deep...don't want to
    Lay on the surface
    I want to try again
    ………..With you
    But can you love me wrong or right?
    If the Divine give us this chance
    Can you?

    Say....

    Did you know?
    I love to taste your wisdom
    As you feed me knowledge
    I crave for the conversation…wanting more
    Each time we say bye…


    (C) 2005
    ROSE~FIRE
     
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    ahhh!! i was deep into this and u stop
    but i can feel the realism of it flowing
    into the mind to call da heart tyte Angel
     
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    lol....Rich I am glad you enjoyed it a part 3 will be in the making this is a everylasting flow that comes with meanings on different levels...Happy you enjoyed as you did...thanks for all the loving support means alot

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    ditto sista likewise...................
     
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