Black Poetry : Can You Please Let Me Love You Now???????

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Jun 27, 2006.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am finally at a stage where my frustration has turned to rage
    Because you won't let me do the thing you long for someone to do the most
    You say you don't want to be alone as you want someone that will
    Give it all up to be with you well
    Here I am everything you want and need
    I'm not perfect for you
    I am you the completion of your soul
    Surer of this I know no one who is more than me
    I would give it all up fo ryou and wouldn't think twice
    You see it took some things happening to me forme to see the light
    And i know you get that tight feeliing in your throat
    When I say I love you
    When I begin to touch you
    When I sit and stare at you
    You say you're afraid to lose me
    Baby I'm not going anywhere
    And all the times that your heart was broken before
    You don't have to worry no more
    I'm trying to give oy the key to your better future
    I'm trying to secure us
    Because honestly I just I just can't lose you
    I want to some day carry your seed again
    Believe in em that is all I ask
    I'm trying to give you the perfect reason to forget your past
    At least say maybe because after three years
    the loss of a baby you never knew
    and a friendship that is so strong and
    A love even stronger
    We at least owe it to eachother to consider the possibility
    So the question still remains
    CAN YOU PLEASE LET ME LOVE YOU NOW?



    Some days i think we forget that taking it slow can be a wonderful thing. I haven't done that I just had to vent out my frustrations about loving someone who's scared of that very thing.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, all I can say is this sometimes you have to let nature take its course and let that person make up their own mind what they want to do. You can't force them to let you love them.

    Nice drop though

    Mannie
     
  3. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you i'm really not trying to force the issue just getting some frustration out of my system.
     
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    Take it slow Soulful2006 and you are right not to force the issue.
    Just continue to let them know that you love them and are there for them. Remeber the old saying sometimes you have to let go of who and what you love and if it comes back then it was meant to be.

    I like however how you expressed your frustrations in the flow.
    Keep flowing my friend
    .
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    im finding you to be a very thoughtful, caring writer. your work just shows a marvelous restraint...which I find very attractive.

    this piece is so well written, I had to back up and read it again, to glean the true purpose out of it....you scribe well, indeed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    moving slowly is a key and it can bring betterment
    it's ok to release and express your all and take in slow
    beyond the forceful glist this was awesomely written sis.
     
  7. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So must say again that i am humbled to have the support and approval of my poetic peers.Abdtract I love the way you seeek into t he depth of what it is I am trying to get across and simplify its raw beauty.
     
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