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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you love me pass my pain

    Sometimes I feel like I'm going insane
    *I wonder can you love me, pass my pain*

    The pain was so deep, it ran through my soul
    invaded my body, til my world turned cold

    so for awhile...

    My heart was on "lock-down"...but only for now
    I'm going through withdrawals, then, onward bound

    It may sound strange, but I invited the pain
    I want to painfully know, what sent me insane

    So I can feel "whole" again, alive and "free"...
    to be "all and everything", I'm suppose to be

    yeah...

    Sometimes I feel like I'm going insane
    so again, I ask...
    *can you love me pass my pain*?
     
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    can love u deep in pain
    to help carry u pass the insane
    and mend the pits that tap at ya
    brain to show u love again
    yes i can love u pass yo pain
    to make u feel whole again

    mad tyte drop i felt this one in my heart
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one tugs at the reader's heartstrings. Sometimes you have to be in the middle of your pain to learn to actually "feel" again. Emotive and strongly felt sis.
     
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    you are such a wonderful poet Sister Queen ... thoroughly enjoyed this peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    You're the Queen of Hearts, Girl!

    I love the question you put to him.
     
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    Pow! Show us Queen's lightning bolt cause this piece struck fire out of the readers. Flow on poet I can feel your pen.....
     
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    this was awesome the question is right on point a woman's heart is very delicate once hurt it is hard to get all the pieces back together...i loved this piece and truelly know this....oh well


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have no doubt, to what you're about
    but can you knock the "pain" right out?

    Make my weak heart strong once more
    and I will love you ...to the core
     
  10. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's so true, and giving the fact that I choose not to live in a fantasy world...I want to keep it real, including bearing with the pain.
    thanks for the love watz
     
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