Black Poetry : Can You Love Me pass the Pain

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Could you love me pass my pain?
    Move my shame and never blame
    Will you look at me the same
    If you knew my pain?
    Would you understand my past?
    Will you leave…..
    …or will you really stay?
    Can you love me pass my pain?
    Soothe my heart and help it heal
    …mold it back together like it use to be
    So many pieces are lost
    Don’t know if I can love again
    But willing to try with you
    Do you think
    ……you can love me pass this pain
    through the hurt?
    Can you just love me pass my pain
    Take my sorrow and turn it to joy
    Take my hurt and make it disappear
    Wipe my tears and cherish
    ….Who I am
    Can you love me pass my pain
    Hold my hand and walk this
    Road with me…
    Unconditionally
    Compassion ally
    Do you think I am silly
    ……For asking you this?
    I need to know because
    …Love has let me down so much
    didn’t matter how much I loved
    …myself
    Love has always left with out a sound
    like thief in the middle of the night
    ….breaking out
    So can you love me pass all my pain?
    You have changed my world
    Got me believing in love again
    I see life through your eyez
    …as I take your hand
    When we are apart I carry
    …Your spirit with me
    Feel your soul deeper
    as each day go past
    Something strong is taken over
    this pain I have inside
    Think of you when
    ……. I am sleeping
    Daydreaming of you
    ………When I am woke
    Wishing you was here with me.
    Can you promise never to break my heart?
    And we will never break apart
    As tears run down my face
    Can you
    Could you
    …. Love me pass my pain
    I was lost until you came in my life
    You got me feeling
    Having me yearning
    Your love have changed who I am
    What I want….
    Never understanding what love really was
    ….Until I met you
    Taking your hand
    …Letting you love me pass all the pain
    I am in love with you
    …. and scared the pain will come again
    (c) One woman's Heart​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We can surely be loved pass our pain, but we have to be the 'healer, for only we, ... knows where the pain lies.
    Awesome piece poet, I can relate!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely love can enter beyond all pain
    eyez of a lover can see above all shame
    a simple yes all u need to hear
    then u can love again without any fear
    and what's sadly broken can be mend
    by dat very one da lover n' friend

    I can relate to this here .....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both for the love on this poem.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can definitely related to this well crafted and sincere piece. I love the flow of this.
     
  6. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!

    Great Write...And a very timely one for me my sister friend, for real!


     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Can You Love Me Pass The Pain" If only it was that easy. The pain of love loss is great and giving it time, first... is the best start to healing.

    Such pain can be a motha!

    Definitely feelin'it souldeep!

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:dance:
     
  8. Rashad

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    Excuse me miss but...

    u have expressed the profound ways of love...poetry i can feel! preciate ur flo today!
     
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    Im glad you still write sister

    This piece reads like a love song
    I think one that anyone whos ever been in love can relate to
    Its a good write sister and Im glad that pen of yours is still doin its thang :)
    Props poetess.
     
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    we all have pain we need to get beyond...

    and we all need love...to help us along. enjoyed the read.

    the river floweth.
     
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