Quiet Poetry Lounge : Can You Hear that Quiet Storm?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listening to the quiet storm
    I haven't done this in so long
    Saying umph, every time a lyric
    gets to me in almost every song
    Swaying, smirking, sighing
    thoroughly enjoying each tune
    Sopranos singing about the stars
    Tenors crooning about the moon
    Wishing that you could hear
    the same sweet music that I do
    But somehow I feel that these
    love songs are stirring within you
    Making you see me with your third eye
    Making you feel me even deeper
    as you strum my heart strings, the
    melody lingers on, eternally, a keeper
    A duet of forever, making me snuggle
    within our harmony, keeping me warm
    Listen closely baby...
    Can you hear that quiet storm?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was like night waves of the ocean flowing
    tyte flow sis.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makes me happy to know you were floating in the waves of it Rich. Thank you for saying so poet.
     
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    ...and the forecast for today
    is "purple passion"...so be sure
    to get your raincoats and umbrellas
    unless the storm is specifically for you
    ...then you may want to just run
    out and dance beneath these wonderful
    words of poetry...

    mmm mmm mmm sister...I can so relate
    those quiet storms are so wonderful

    This was Beautifully Romantic...
    Write on chile...
    Sage
     
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    Yes aren't quiet storms loud? :hearts4: Exuberating and worth looking forward to have happen. I love being smacked by a love attack. Jump on my back; let me know I am alive. Feeling my heart beat and my mind searching for a way to remain close. Please don't ask me not to go. :missu: Because I won't leave if you tell me so. My better judgment has been lost I know. I don't care who knows its so. :hearthis: World I am in love. I have been :kiss1: So quiet storms come from above. :rain: :rain: :rain: Rain down on me.
     
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    Guess I'll just dance in it a while then sage. Your responses flow like poetry. Thank you for humbling me once again.
    Hodee, seems like you've been caught enough in one of those storms to appreciate them when they hit. Enjoy that shower brotha. Appreciate your response.
     
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    True love is all in the details, and you captured is achingly well, my sister.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sista gempis, for your kind response to my flow.
     
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    Nice flow watz, its crazy how quietly storms can creep up on you. though i must say they generally serve a purpose
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes they do serve a purpose sista phenomenal. Thank you much poet.
     
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