Black Poetry : Can you have some?Hea Naw!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Apr 30, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The boys they be sayin' I'm greedy
    Won't help out the needy
    Said I was probably good if I wasn't stingy
    Just the thought of it makes me cringy
    Why should I give you my stuff
    Don't bluff,tell you no straight up
    Maybe played around a bit let you touch it
    Can't see nothing more because it's my love bucket
    "Just let me put the head in...."
    Let me break it down a minute so you can understand
    N
    O
    Well we all should know that spells NO!
    Babygurl got way more precious things to worry about then your thing in her glamity
    What if something goes wrong and we have to start a family
    That's not the only thing what about a STD
    Will this only be a memory of you and me
    In the sheets soakin' wet shivering
    Used Usher's words,"That's What It's Made For....."
    Maybe for some of the loose ones go catch one
    She got everything out on display yellin,"Hey hon."
    I'm savin' it locking up my shop so please stop
    Because when you ask me constantly I get hot
    How dare you ask me if you can have some?
    This is mine and forever will be one
    Til' my king comes and unlocks the gate
    Step up out my face because I'm finna wait"bye bye" :wave:
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there you go :toast:

    keep that gate locked little level-headed princess.

    jh.
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah

    little level-headed princess lol I think I found a new nickname and I like it thanx a mil' for the love.Madia got me sayin' "CLANK CLANK":lol: :peace: :thanks:
     
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    :fight: bang out the poetry my sister bang it out :fight:
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: For your support
    :thanks: For the love
    :bomb: what bang?I'ma blow it out :wink:
     
  6. turtle1

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    YESSSSSSS!!!!!!

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    THIS POEM NEEDS TO GO OUT TO ALL THE SCHOOLS!!!!!!!!
    I LOVE IT SISTA!!!!!!!!!!!!
    THIS IS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> :hot:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:








    :jumping:
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  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH WOW THIS IS TIGHT TO DEATH AW GIRL YOU LEFT HOMEBOY IS A COLD SWEAT FOR REAL HA! HA! HA! YO GO GIRL
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol:Madd my bad lol....thanx Turtle I think they should see it also THANX EVERYBODY :deal:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed
    likes
    keep on
     
  10. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love seeing young ones with their head on their shoulders. your going to go far with your outlook