Black Poetry : Can You Feel Your Pride?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naija-man, Jan 23, 2004.

  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Close your eyes, feel your roots-Can you hear the drum?
    Close your eyes, feel your roots-Can you feel the rhythm?
    Close your eyes, feel your roots-Can you dance with pride?
    Close your eyes feel your roots-Can see the colours?
    Close your eyes, feel your roots-Can you smell the scents?
    Close your eyes, feel your roots-Can you taste the sweetness?
    Close your eyes, feel your roots-Can feel the earth?
    Close your eyes, feel your roots-Can you feel your pride?
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very creative style to this scribe..i do indeed feel this
    nice one
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes feeling dis here a nice unique way of scribe
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    vibing in the visual texture of this piece
    and yes...I'm feeling the pride that exudes
    from your flow...
    Great read!
     
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    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simple yet deep. I love your style.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love your style, i will close my eyes and feel my roots
     
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