Black Haiku : "Can we"

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    Share our existance
    bare loves greatest submission
    unwined together

    gossip is u will
    to confess and feel i'm real
    as we spill our love

    So can we tonight
    mark our space in place within
    to an alright state
     
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    Spaces and places
    leave love's traces in our hearts
    to relax and sigh

    I guess when love is
    in the air, others can sense
    what drifts in the clouds

    Confession can be
    quite good for the soul, as I
    feel your soul in mine
     
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    Can i show you how
    What i feel can't be contained
    My soul speaks volumes
     
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    Heart and soul mixing
    like a crossroad in morning
    morrow's of us now

    Every words spoken
    the spirit hears it deeply
    can we mentally
     
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    Can we mentally
    combine our candlelight to
    create passion's fire?

    Drawing near the light
    of that blaze, can the morning
    morph into tonight?
     
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    wait can we u know
    tonight under da moon light
    down by the fire place

    let me ,if u will
    feel the and kiss ya well deep
    to make u know me
     
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    While the stars shine so
    brightly in the Northern sky,
    can we, you know, touch?

    Can we do those things
    that take me, and make you, can
    we get aquainted?
     
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    Often asked question
    yet never answered what is
    and can we for once
     
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    Some questions answer
    themselves, but rhetorical
    this is not, can we?
     
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    pointless yet hopeful
    seeing without eyes are doom
    so i think u know