Black Poetry : CAN WE JUST !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Can we tonight
    just
    lay beside da stillness
    embrace the thoughts
    kiss mentally
    and
    let our spiritrual attraction
    behold us inside this fold
    Just for once
    can we glaze in da depth
    of our emotions to feel us
    close
    Can we just
    not go into a physical lay
    but a lay where our mindz
    dance on da spool of radiant love
    can we just
    tonight see beyond lust
    into a passionate state of us
    inside da intimacy of togetherness
    can we, can we babe !
    just
    move upon da glist of starz above
    silently fall under da spell of waterfalls
    and hear our beats of heart
    Can i just
    tonight hold you in my arms
    caress your weary mind , body and soul
    rub ya tender feet
    bath you in my realism of love
    can i just
    so you know i am of you completely
    can we just tonight
    let go da pain of resound memories
    wedd a start of us to a morrow
    can we my love
    reach into our hearts to unlock it
    can we Just
    seal this kiss for which i so lone
    to taste da moist ripple of ya lips
    and tongue bath lockin together
    wit a twist effect of joy
    can you just
    say yes yes yes !!!
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    Can you just not pen a poem that dosen't
    make my mind wonder in time over and over again.

    Now you know I luv it...I luv it.....

    Awesomely Beautiful!!!


    Much Luv
     
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    Thank you sis.....Happy you enjoyed it
     
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    Can we just tonight
    forget this world
    and embark under a tree
    just
    me and you to share
    these moments of love
    can we just !