Black Poetry : Can We Just...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Sep 21, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Talk,
    About me,
    About you,
    But not necessarily about us.
    I’m sure we have,
    Lots of things to discuss.
    I don’t mind,
    If you fill my time,
    Explaining to me,
    How you feel,
    About life.
    Let’s keep it real.
    Can we just talk,
    Just me,
    Just you,
    No interruptions,
    Remove all obstructions,
    Like you holding back,
    When you know,
    We did this before.
    But now I want more,
    More of your thoughts,
    More of your reactions,
    More of your dreams,
    More of you…
    Occupy my space.
    It never got replaced.
    It was always waiting on you.
    Can we just talk,
    And I want you to lead the way,
    Just open up,
    Say whatever you want to say.
    Ask me anything,
    I’m comfortable with you,
    There’s no need to wonder why.
    I will always tell it like it is,
    Never falsely deny, or lie.
    And even if you ask me,
    If I still have feelings for you,
    I’ll say…….
    I’ll say…….
    I think….
    I do…
    We really need to talk.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    time to have a sit down...this was well felt
     
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    This piece felt so warm and familiar. Those long talks can be wonderful, can't they? I enjoyed the ease of this vibe poet.
     
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    loved the realism in this piece. Flow on!
     
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    I love the approach of this poetic "Let's have a talk" drop! :wink:
     
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    :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: WOW loved this piece nice drop
     
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    Bearing it all to the soul is a wonderful thing...sometimes just talking/listening can refresh the heart. nice and easy drop...keep the flows coming.
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all for your responses.......I'm glad it felt real.......because it is...it definitely is. But even though I feel as if we really need to talk....i don't think that there is goin to be a follow up on the piece stating what actually was said. Let's just say that i'm once bitten, twice shy....I'm talkin about the same person, and my feelings still have not died. Wow that's sad. I just wish he wa able to accept this piece as well as u all did.







    I can feel you, feeling me poetically.....don't stop. :roll:
     
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    truely one will feel da emotions flowing from this once it set in
     
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    very nice drop.....i know its nothing like having a talk...listening and talking very nicely posed...