Black Poetry : can u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 11, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See I gots to go here…
    So come tell me what ya feeling…
    is it all just a hazy faze..
    That makes you lead thru dis maze…
    You bring da heat…I serve da treat..
    That you claim is so sweet..
    Just tell me whats ya feeling…
    I gave up da key..thinking of only
    You…are you ready for me to show you
    What I can do for you…tell me
    Can ya handle the midnight play
    Can you deal with everyday mood..
    Can you can you….
    Can I show what real love is
    Can I love you in my way
    Can I
    see I am not understanding..
    So when you talk of dis love…
    Do it make ya float like a dove…
    do you see the starz above
    a little brighter…how do the moon shine?
    you hold my hand you shed tears just
    as I do…but this love you talk about
    what is it..can you even explain it?
    Do you think you can handle
    once I invade your
    Mental..
    Can I show you my ways..
    Can you deal with it
    Can you…
    When I need you
    Can you be there
    When I hurt
    Can you move them tears…
    And place a smile…
    Can you…
    Can I be the one who you love
    Can I be the one
    Can i…..
    In da middle of the nite
    Will you be there..willing
    To hold me close..
    Can you promise..
    I can…
    I don’t understand all this
    But I am sure when its time
    It will be clear…
    But until then…
    Can I just love you in my way..
    Can you just love me for who I am…
    Can you can you can you…

    blkangel thang
     
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    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moments to ponder

    mzblkangel, I hear your heart talking loud and with purpose, so that means someone close in hand need to rethink their value and get with the program. For the love you are talking goes farther and deeper than one could ever imagine. Nice but serious message, I enjoyed the flow, thanks.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak so clear and well felt
    dis here tells the tale of ya true love
    one may answer within
    very very nice emotional love drop
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin this, girl, this is sooo pretty
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    thanks family for likin my little long poem...
    much love ta ya....Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can't be any clearer with this one....very heartfelt. Everyone should be this crystal....
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname..yes indeed..but all dont speak so clear...
    at times ya got ta push..thanks for da love
     
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    ah sister
    you are vibing
    feeling this
    very nice
    from the heart
    Peace
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz sister blue...glad ya likes my little long poem....Angel
     
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    This was the aged old love question here...

    I LOVED THIS TO THE FULLEST...The age old questions of love!
    Posed with such sass and flava!

    Blessings On Your House! :hot: :hot: