Quiet Poetry Lounge : Can U

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 10, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See I gots to go here…
    So come tell me what ya feeling…
    is it all just a hazy faze..
    That makes you lead thru dis maze…
    You bring da heat…I serve da treat..
    That you claim is so sweet..
    Just tell me whats ya feeling…
    I gave up da key..thinking of only
    You…are you ready for me to show you
    What I can do for you…tell me
    Can ya handle the midnight play
    Can you deal with everyday mood..
    Can you can you….
    Can I show what real love is
    Can I love you in my way
    Can I
    see I am not understanding..
    So when you talk of dis love…
    Do it make ya float like a dove…
    do you see the starz above
    a little brighter…how do the moon shine?
    you hold my hand you shed tears just
    as I do…but this love you talk about
    what is it..can you even explain it?
    Do you think you can handle
    once I invade your
    Mental..
    Can I show you my ways..
    Can you deal with it
    Can you…
    When I need you
    Can you be there
    When I hurt
    Can you move them tears…
    And place a smile…
    Can you…
    Can I be the one who you love
    Can I be the one
    Can i…..
    In da middle of the nite
    Will you be there..willing
    To hold me close..
    Can you promise..
    I can…
    I don’t understand all this
    But I am sure when its time
    It will be clear…
    But until then…
    Can I just love you in my way..
    Can you just love me for who I am…
    Can you can you can you…
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my reply!

    Hey baby, how was your day?
    Can I greet you with a kiss, and take your worries away?
    Can I run a hot bath, to make you relax your woes?
    Can I wash you all over, starting from head to toe?
    Can I make you dinner, your favorite meal?
    Can I give you another kiss, this one you can really feel?
    Can I pull back the sheets, and lay you down?
    Can I massage every muscle, and work my way down?
    Can I taste your goodness, and make you feel all right?
    Can I put on my sadle, and ride that horse tonight?
    Can I hear your echos of sensual madness arise?
    Can I see your expressions, as you close your eyes?
    Can I put you in a dream state, that your mind can`t resist?
    Can I grab you by the shoulders, as I move my hips?
    Can I flow with your body, as you tremble with pleasure?
    Can I whisper in your ear, as we lay here together?
    Can I?
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you off da hook...

    thanks for da reply...
    wooo i's b speechless
    right now
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i like y'all off da hook on dis here......wow
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naws now i bes good ..that was cp off da hook up in here...lol
    thanks richie rich fo da read...
     
  6. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOHHHH!! Ya'll is X-rated in here. Like ya flow though!
     
  7. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Ya'll are tearing it up. Nice flow....nice kem.
    :D
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read yall....
    glad ya enjoyed...