Black Poetry : Can U Just Love Me ........

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It's been some time past
    through humble words
    our ties spoken in depth
    with all the emotions it
    brings forth questions

    can u just love me !
    when i seem to frown
    as it cling to my face
    and i act of a clown
    where no one can trace

    can u just love me !
    when i need some tyme
    in my quiet tiny space
    or when i say things
    my heart wish to erase

    can u just love me !

    When i carry a broken smile
    or when my feeling are miles
    and confess my heart
    to be sure and fine ya lips
    my cure, tell me

    can u just love me !

    When my body yearn & burn for u
    that touch , a cuddle one hug
    am i asking to much to care or bare
    i am in yo hair
    and when u can't make love to me
    because we are like galaxy is it to
    much

    can u just love me !

    When i break down and cry
    speak truth without a lie
    give my honor & respect
    keep u sweaty & wet
    show u passionate affection
    protect ya heart's direction
    guide your humble soul
    cover u when u cold
    when at night it's yo body
    i lone and wish u belong
    inside the mystical of my home

    can u just love me !

    If u can :congrats: to your heart ur in love
    and i compromise u my loyality & grace i hold
    cometh my beloveth upon me and loveth me.

    A DYAMONDLUV Twist
    Nu~Wave 2005 Creation
    $R :kiss2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you are in love, deep, there are times when on the one hand, you want to thrash the person, and on the other, you just want to hug them. Questions arise, but the love remains. This flowed so genuinely...well done scribe.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is when you know the love is true
    this was a perfectly laid with
    questions that runs deep when
    one finds that love special...
    i can dig this...
    that something called
    unconditional love
    oh yeah....


    :hearts4:
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true watz it can bring sometime pain yet joy all the same
    love is powerful within Thankz .

    yes indeed Angel it's what they call true love a unconditional love
    this i know so well it's printed deep in my heart Thankz .
     
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    now the confess lay and questions play
    I wanna know can u love me ?

    if u can make me understand ya plan !
    can u lady , can u love me ?
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and the answer is....

    I will wipe your tears
    And not judge when you fall
    My heart will answer
    When you call
    No matter the rain
    The sun will always shine
    Turn your cold nights
    Into warm dreams
    understand your plan
    and make it my desire
    i would be your fire
    to an everlasting flame

    see...
    I know life will bring you pain
    and you grow

    I will love you
    Right or wrong
    My love is real
    Now I turn to you
    and ask....
    My heart been torn apart
    And the clouds seem to not move
    Can you love me through all the pain?

    The darkness I have seen
    Has shattered my soul apart
    But I always get back up and fight
    And try one more time
    Each time I come back stronger
    Will you judge me when I fall?

    Can you love me
    ….Though all the pain
    Mend my heart
    Help me see brighter days
    Can you love me
    Unconditional
    Completely
    Tenderly
    Will it be true?

    No matter the rain

    Because I can love
    In the storm
    In the sun
    Above the moon
    And through all your pain….

    lets remove the clouds
    and let the sun in...
    I can love you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh! yes
    if u can do all that
    let it be , now lady
    come to me
    let me feel the rapture
    of ya heart this where
    true love start
    if u can just love me
    for me and what u see
    then come sit side me
    and let's drift down into
    a soulful connection
    and let me feel ya great
    compassion of affection
    yes if u can just love me !

    Thankz for the flow i enjoyed it so.
     
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    "Can you just love me" ...
    From the abundance of the heart...the mouth speaks
    there's millions of stars in the sky...yet just one fell
    thanks, for falling on us shining star
    :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u know u just touch me deep
    thank u Queentswana making me feel all mushy
     
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    Hi Brother Rich
    wonderful poem poet
    I was carried away by the
    slow mode of the tides
    drifting in your words
    I really enjoy this flow

    Peace
     
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