Black Poetry : CAN U HANDLE IT?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Dec 30, 2007.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    ^^ bet she miss you now!

    IF U GIVE ME POWER OVER UR EMOTIONS
    I'LL TAKE U THERE..

    AND NOT JUST GO THRU THE MOTIONS..

    I C THE WAY U LK AT ME
    SWEETY UR EYES THEY JUST DON' LIE..

    I KNOW U SCARED .. BUT MY LOVE DON'T HURT

    SHSSS.... JUST PUT UR LOVE INSIDE!

    IT'S LATE AND I CAN'T WAIT
    BEEN ANTICIPATING THIS...

    BEEN DAYDREAMIN ALL DAY LONG..
    BOUT HOW YOUR LIPS ARE SEXIEST...

    I WONDER HOW MUCH OF YOU..
    YOUR WILLIN TO LET ME GO EXPLORE..

    I'LL GLADLY TAKE UR BODY..
    BUT UR HEART'S WHAT I'M VYING FOR..

    I WANT UR HEART... BUT THERE HAS TO BE
    OF HEARTS.. EVEN EXCHANGE..

    OF COUSE I SURRENDER TO UR LOVE...
    BUT DO U SURRENDER THE SAME??
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    my hands are up

    i surrender

    hahahahhaahhahaha

    man

    girl i feel you here

    you puttin' on 'em hard baby

    and i'm feeling this hea

    poet


    peace
     
  3. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    But Do you Surrender The Same??

    I was fo sho riddlin ya name...

    I called to u .. and u came...

    **** homey... u got game!!!!!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    yes i got game but i don't play games
    i could surrender the same
    if the chips on table ain't trying to cause pain
    i spread truth for the love not for the fame
     
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    Good write! Flow head now!
    DS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now !!!!

    continue on
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Life's a game the we must play...
    what's beneath the things we say..

    the truth thru our words.. is what we seek
    the meaning her words have power.. how does she speak?

    If she only cause you pain.. then how can two come out the rain..
    if your to lead and she to follow.. can't be love 2day and war 2morrow...

    what I say is for the silly chicks...
    that really can't see what they working wit....

    a flaw.. i don't think so... they battle scars...
    So really u perfect just the way u are....

    fame really ain't important.. the truth important by far...
    a Street So'ja to me... is a super-star!
     
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    Girl, you betta read him his rights!!! LOL!!! I loved the piece and the response from DSS...keep it flowin' ya!!!
     
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    Gave him something to think about Miss Lady, great flow, and like HopelisRomantic I liked the response from So'ja as well, alright now!
     
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    He has the right.. to be a man...
    that's what silly chicks don't understand...

    She has the right to his respect...
    He's the protector not she.. we can't forget..

    He has the right.. to run the home..
    She has the right to not want to be alone..

    His rib was taken.. so he has the right to her company...
    She has the right to nurture naturally..

    But with rights comes her power to choose...

    But with rights comes his power to abuse..

    Freewill gives the right to be free...
    But freedom is being what you were meant to be..

    As u can see from this world...

    We'd be ok.. if boy was boy
    and girl was girl...

    I would like to just add comentary to the last verse.. the meaning or what I mean to get accross.. is that IMO... men should rule the world and women should nurture it.. For me it's hard to man up, but it's easy to nurture...
     
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