Black Poetry : can u feel me !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    River flowing
    like my love
    pumping by beats
    like da dingo drum
    cascading deep
    into the windz
    caring the sound
    unto u
    tappin
    rappin
    at ya soul
    seekin the rapture
    within deeply
    my eyez
    stroll and feeling
    float unleasing a
    emotion
    my body sit in
    the pool of love
    awaiting u
    can u hear me !
    my heart speaking out
    in tongue
    and my soul calling
    i taste da moment
    as i am place'd near
    da edge of tyme
    weaved in da web
    of love
    tears rush down my
    cheek and curl under
    my feet
    leaving a wet place
    yet my heart rapidly
    beats in tone to a
    musical harp
    can u hear me !
    before the chamber doors
    close
    can u feel me !
    before my day end
    and i fly away :eek:hmy:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awe now here you go today
    can ya feel me? you ask hmmm
    come a little closer i let you know
    tight drop...love it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    closer u say hummmmm! ok
    Thankz sis...
     
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    Yes, I can feel you
    In all you write and say
    I can feel you
    In all the tears and dismay
    I can sense you in the
    air that I breathe. In the taste
    of your lips. Not to worry,
    those vibes weren't made in haste.
    I feel the vibrations of love sent
    And all that is meant
    Heart to heart
    Soul to soul
    Hand in hand
    I feel you

    this was beautiful, Rich....
     
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    can u feel da
    silent whisper
    the thump of da
    heart beat
    can feel the rapture
    as it move ya feet
    the wind sweep
    swiftly and carry
    the motion in flow

    Thank u sis.........
     
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    I feel you as surely
    as my blood runs rapid
    through my veins.
    I feel you like
    an icey chill
    from the mornings clenzing rain
    I hear your song
    as it echoes through
    my soul
    my head is hung as yours
    as my tears release
    the pain
    The night is closing fast
    as I gaze upon the light
    in the crack of the
    closing chamber door
    My voice screams out
    to call you
    as the door becomes fully closed
    I await in sorrows seat
    until the day our love
    is complete
    why have you flown away?
    Did you not feel my hearts
    humble beats?

    Tyte drop Mr.Rich!
     
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    u felt me heart ring
    u felt the smile i bring
    i flew up on hope
    as the wind swish & blow
    i felt the rapid thump
    at my soul
    so i return
    do u hear me
    feel da beckon call
    Thanks sistah purplemoons
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :eeek: :jawdrop: :eeek: :jawdrop: :eeek: Mad flow up in here!
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: To u!
     
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    word up brutha the sistah's must of heard da heart speaking !
    Thankz python
     
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