Black Poetry : Can This Love Work?

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You reaching your pinnacles
    God's been good to you
    Since you came into the
    ministry such wise words
    I have heard you speak
    and some profound things
    made me see

    But there is
    some inconsistency
    in the things you say and the
    things that you do.

    Came back a changed man
    that much is true.
    Can this love work
    will it last this time with me
    and you?

    Well patience is a virtue and
    in time all things
    are made known
    And if you really changed and
    if you have really grown...
    Then don't do things that hurt
    me...especially when you know
    I'm trying! To be the kind of
    woman that you
    need and that
    God wants me
    to be!


    Took a lot for me to trust you
    those are my issues that I can
    see .



    But my motivations are but to
    love you with a heart that is
    strong and pure...

    Can this love work with me
    and you?

    And I don't like having
    these
    doubts
    about you...?????:confused: :confused: :heart:
    BJS(C)2002
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    pondering along with you poet

    wondering

    will it be the same or better or worse?

    chances we take
    decisions we make

    peace MSB
    DSS
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soja my Soja I missed you dear friend!

    EVEN IN MY DOUBT, GOD IS WORKING IT OUT!:D :D
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE
    I MISSED YOU VERY MUCH!
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mslb

    i shared this with a friend...she's been dealing with a issue with her special some1. said your peace made her fell better about the choice she made to wait for her answer..



    One
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS!

    My sista in Hotlanta , thank you! I appreciate knowing that my words helped someone...for if I can help but one someone along my way..."Then my living has not been in vain"!
    Tell her to wait on the Lord creatively!
    BLESSINGS ON THE SISTA'S WHO WAIT!
     
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    the questions..God answers them all. Nice piece

    blak
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is so right on. In church and out this is real...no doubt.
     
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    Only God knows!
    If a Wall can fall in a day
    Whose to say that
    The Lord cannot make a way
    The only way to know
    Is to follow his lead
    Each and every day
     
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    Ms B

    Love can alwayz work baby... work with it! It was nice reading you again...

    Reas
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your support and wisdom!

    The collective empathy in this room is sometimes overwhelming sometimes surprising, but always , always welcomed by me...
    Know that God is working it out...even when I doubt and I know this to be true. It is when given an opportunity to speak what is deep within our hearts that we find the winds of change can rearrange and make things plain. I have found so much solace
    in your words and I greatly appreciate you all. Much LUV!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:heart:
     
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